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For Smooth Challenge

By Babs IversonPublished 18 days ago β€’ 1 min read
Photo by Anthony Tran on Unsplash

Smooth hoop shot proves

Smooth moves

Smooth as a peach

Smooth pebbles on a beach

Smooth talker

Smooth rocker

Smooth as a lullaby

Smooth blue sky

Smooth Eucalyptus oil

Smooth soil

Smooth music

Smooth folk-music

Smooth bread dough

Smooth as snow

Smooth snow cloud

Smooth crowd

Smooth as ice

Smooth advice

Smooth as silk

Smooth coconut milk

Smooth soft hands

Smooth plans

Smooth skin

Smooth win

Smooth as cotton

Smooth gotten

Smooth as glass

Smooth grass

Smooth steel

Smooth as a baby seal

Smooth paint

Smooth constraint

Smooth as wax

Smooth axe

Smooth butter

Smooth putter

Smooth as carpet

Smooth bull market

Smooth sand

Smooth land

Smooth shampoos

Smooth suede shoes.


About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Lamar Wiggins4 days ago

    Wow! Now that was chocked full of smoothness... Excellent work, Babs!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)10 days ago

    I love the flow of this poem, it felt a stream of consciousness sort of piece. But you had this enticing rhyme scheme that made the whole thing feel very SMOOTH!! Great work Babs!! 😊

  • Oh very nice I am feeling the smooth groove!

  • Real Poetic11 days ago

    Smooth shampoo is the best! πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ Great entry!

  • Super smooth rhymes! 🀍 Great entry!

  • Dana Crandell15 days ago

    Very smooth and excellent rhyming! And now I've got Elvis in my brain singing, "Smooth Suede Shoes." πŸ˜‚ Wonderful challenge entry, Babs!

  • Awesome and so smooth of you Babs!! Love it!!πŸ’–πŸ’œ

  • Atomic Historian16 days ago

    An interesting take on the challenge. I like your interpretation of the challenge

  • J. S. Wade16 days ago

    Silken smooth makes me want to croon!! Awesome Babs. πŸ₯°

  • Sid Aaron Hirji17 days ago

    that was a fun one

  • Laura Lann17 days ago

    A very fun read :)

  • Naveed17 days ago

    Gorgeous work, Babs! Your use of rhymes in this piece was truly enchanting!

  • Novel Allen17 days ago

    Hey Babs, leave us some of the smooth things. This is really a song.

  • This seemed very lyrical so I sang it to my own tune! Loved your smooth poem!

  • Donna Renee17 days ago

    beautiful, Babs!! I loved the rhymes you put in this!

  • Smooth poem.

  • Cathy holmes17 days ago

    Now that's smooth. Well done.

  • Mariann Carroll18 days ago

    The is some smooth list you got there

  • Tiffany Gordon 18 days ago

    Outstanding! BRAVO!

  • JBaz18 days ago

    I like how you fit in β€˜ smooth suede shoes’. Nice one

  • This is a great take in the challenge Babs. Well done πŸ‘

  • Mother Combs18 days ago

    perfectly smooth thinking there on your part

  • Margaret Brennan18 days ago

    When you think about it, as you did, there are really so many "smooth" things in the world. We just have to "see" them. GREAT poem.

  • Jay Kantor18 days ago

    Dear 'B' - How Cutesy ...and I never use that expression. I don't enter contests - so you SO have my vote! Since you don't subscribe to me - May I 'Smooth Talk' you into viewing 'Baby Mamas' - It was written with our Generation in mind. If you don't relate please stand in line for a refund. 'j'

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