the taste of you
an acrostic challenge entry
Distracted by the taste of your cherry lips, my rough hands slide oh so slowly along your feverish, aching skin. Our tongues tangle and plunder while my flesh moves against yours,
Intimate in the way I remember each and every dip and curve.
Salacious longing and desire burn,
Tripping and tumbling through my bloodstream on a euphoric high sending my fragile heart
Racing, barely able to recover
All because I can't get enough of you. I'm obsessed.
Completely overwhelmed as our bodies tangle, while I beg and plead at your altar–give me everything–
Til we're joined in a crucible of our own making and melded into one being, no longer distracted but connected.
Incomplete when we're apart.
Only whole when we come together.
Never again, alone.
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Comments (17)
This is my favourite kind of poetry ❤️✨ Sensual feels and captivating. Great work ✨❤️
OOOOOO SPICY!!!!! Delectable!!
This is so good! Beautifully spicey!
Oooo, a crucible! It's been so long since I heard that word! Crucible makes so much sense for incomplete when apart and whole when together. Also, fun fact, I loved pronouncing a crucible as 'krukible' 🤣🤣🤣 I'm weird like that hahahah. Loved your poem!
This is absolutely dripping with passion; I'm obsessed! So many rich and amorous lines in here--how on Earth do you do this, my talented friend? This was spicy and sensual while at the same time soooo romantic. Exceptional job!! 😍
Truly amazing! I ❤ U.....
Another brilliant and steamy piece of poetry , great work
I think Completely obsessed needs to be on a new line? It's very good, I think I'm just immune to sexy writing 🤪
Hot…hot…hot
You keep heating up the place, Heather. I may need another cold shower after this one. Passionately erotic & filled with yearning. Well done.
I think I am just going to say my classic. Damn - Paul Stewart. Fin. Well done, though!
So beautiful !
I need a cigarette and I don't smoke!
Burning desire, well done
Honestly I don't usually read stories and poems about love (or that are intimate), but just wanted to say this was thoroughly descriptive and full of emotion
Oh, this is sexy. I just had to turn on the fan. Well done, Empress of Sensuality.
Jeez, Heather, I'm tryna' work here! 🥵 🤣 Great job!