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Don't wait till the end...

Ask me in December, Babs' unofficial Challenge

By Anna Published 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024
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Ask me in December,

when the trees lose their green,

the birds fly far away,

and the forests fall asleep.

Ask me, when no one's around

on the snowy street,

where memories are found

and new ones are made.

Ask me if I have faith...

Look! Just stop for a moment,

admire the majestic sunset,

dance and laugh,

be young once again.

don't be afraid

of showing your real self

because that's you

when you smile,

when you cry,

when you say that you're fine

but you're broken inside

and I know that you lie

I don't want you to hide,

just talk to me, alright?

Ask me if we have time,

I'll say "yes, we do,

and we deserve to have"

and you know what?

Ask me now!

Don't wait till the end,

don't look for snow or cold

or any of that,

don't ask others,

ask me, a friend...

Written for Babs' unofficial Ask me in December challenge:

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  • Denise E Lindquist22 days ago

    Congratulations on your well-deserved top story!πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Patrick M. Ohana23 days ago

    Congrats on your top story!

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a month ago

    Congratulations on your top story. ❀️

  • Novel Allenabout a month ago

    Beautiful. Congrats.

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Anna, Tip! I am Honoring C. Rommial Butler's request!!!

  • Gloria Penelopeabout a month ago

    Congratulations on top story!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    Awesome work, Anna! Congrats on your top story!

  • Isabella Roseabout a month ago

    The most important thing you can provide is safety. It's on that basis that friendships grow. Impressive writing.

  • Gabriela Trofin-TatΓ‘rabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations for top story!! <3

  • Ricardo de Moura Pereiraabout a month ago

    Very good

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    You've created a real sense of safety with the speaker here.

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a month ago

    Congratulations on your top story. I love your story

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    I loved your poem. Congratulations on TS!πŸ’•

  • Caroline Cravenabout a month ago

    Beautiful Anna. Fantastic top story!

  • Kodahabout a month ago

    Congrats on top story!!πŸ’ŒπŸ₯³πŸŽ‰πŸ₯³πŸŽ‰

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Anh D Leabout a month ago

    Nicely

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    Congratulations on Top Story! So excited for you, Anna! πŸ₯³ πŸ‘πŸ»

  • Margaret Brennanabout a month ago

    I love this. I'm so blessed that I have two wonderful friends who care more that I ever thought they would. congratulations on TS.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    This is wonderful, Anna! Such care for someone dear in a time of pain captured in such Beautiful lines that flowed so effortlessly

  • Colleen Walters2 months ago

    Oh wow. Just wow. The ministry of presence- β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’―

  • John Cox2 months ago

    This is both a wonderful poem as well as a reminder of what it means to be a true friend. Great work, Anna!

  • C. Rommial Butler2 months ago

    Well-wrought!

  • Sean Elliott2 months ago

    Beautiful piece! It feels like too often we don't realize how much our loved ones might be suffering until it is too late (in this case, until it's already December)

  • I love this!!! It's sweet how it ends in asking a friend!!! Excellent work Anna!!!

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