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The Pain You Can't Get Rid Of

Thoughts from the Youngest

By Cathy holmesPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Living with two siblings,

The youngest and only girl,

Lonely was my home life,

Chaos was their world.

*

They never wanted me around.

They’d make me go away.

It wasn’t fair. I hated them.

I only wanted to play.

*

They were two peas in their own pod.

Just a year apart in age.

They didn’t want no nasty girls,

And tried to lock me in a cage.

*

They built a fort, high in a tree,

And never let me in,

Until our parents forced them to,

Much to their chagrin.

*

“Mom, Jerry’s hitting me”,

The scream came from my head.

“DON’T EVER HIT YOUR SISTER.

AND GO STRAIGHT TO YOUR BED”.

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They got in so much trouble,

And blamed it all on me.

But I was just a little girl,

As innocent as could be.

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I swear it was their own fault,

A lie, I’d never tell.

For I was taught that if I did,

Then I’d go straight to hell.

*

Now that we’re so much older,

And many years have passed.

They like to reminisce about,

Their sister, the pain in the ass.

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Looking back as adults,

I’m sure we all agree,

That “pain you can’t get rid of”,

Was never them, ‘twas me.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Mackenzie Davis6 months ago

    Haha, wow, the turn here is so different from what I usually see in poetry like this. You have a way with words, particularly in how you look back on the past. I can see some "between the lines" truths from your childhood and I love seeing how the perspective looking back takes on two shapes: the lived experience, and the matured wisdom. So wholesome. I so enjoyed this.

  • Such self-awareness, & still.... (They really were pains in your ass, too.)

  • I love this, Cathy. It is a fun read packed with emotion. Well done!

  • Sara Wilson8 months ago

    This was so good! I'm also the youngest of three and felt this lol

  • I see 😁😆🥰💜💯😍Great piece, Cathy🙌

  • Dana Crandell8 months ago

    Your stories are just so fucking entertaining! (I did that just for you, Cathy.) Wonderful words, as always. I really enjoyed reading them again!

  • Donna Renee8 months ago

    Hahah! I love this and the ending made me giggle 🥰😁

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    Lol trust me to find this, like it and then link to it in one of my pieces and forget to leave a damn comment. This is beautiful!

  • Emma Kate Coleman8 months ago

    I was the girl sandwiched between two boys who loved to play “Army,” and they somehow managed to rope me into their games. This takes me back in time!

  • Phil Flannery8 months ago

    As always Cathy, witty and clever, I love reading your stuff. I just have to mention something off topic, that old wringer washing machine brings back memories.

  • Heather Hubler11 months ago

    Awww!!! My daughter is the only girl and has 2 older brothers and one younger. At least she was able to get her little brother to be her doll :) I wanted to hug your cute little self!! I love that you made this into a poem.

  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    Oh Cathy this is PRECIOUS! Full of emotion and so much truth. I too was the youngest and only girl for a loooong time until my cousin came along. I don't think my brothers were so mean and took good care and included me most of the time when playing. I felt every word of your poem and it seems like good therapy and healing. Thank you so much for sharing it.

  • Being not included always sucks

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