The Grid
Florescent Poem
THE GRID: Plugged-in//:
light fantastic, a tale of circuitry or
/story of urban lighting/
through the ages. Starting
from torches to braziers, instigating
gas-lighting and lamplighter onward;
moving on-->
to the ivy sprawl of the electric grid and
imaging it as seen from airplanes, jets thousandfold kilometers soaring in the sky bowl,
like a stiff bunch of silver smoky birds. Breathess sighs:
oh the fantastic lights/
the wondrous beasts/
Lost in Suburbia--
wondering/wandering
where are the stars? Light Pollution on the Grid [refulgent in the insane diamond light,
miniaturized]—but our Hero had never really seen the Stars. Really? well...at all! sure, one or two would poke through faintly the haze of the luminary city duomo planetarium...
but...to soar in stars, be blanketed by stars,
even camping with the Jersey Devil, the crystal of the dread forest of night fulla Wendigos arctic Yeti, someday out in NATUE: different domed planetarium, from remote mountaintops he’d heard tell of, glacial silence: these were a few of his favorite thinks.
However, these were and could be
favorite things that he’d never seen
with his naked eye, not by page or screenturner,
a tube baby, brained in civilian dome-bake.
Although,
he holds to the fruit and not the flower.
In such sweet and dulcet strains of loneliness THE STARS
are bulbous pinpricks
a turning wheel of sky.
That was what he took away from
a visit to the planetarium
[virtual reality
only imaginable under the veil of city light pollution]...
About the Creator
Rob Angeli
sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt
There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.
-Virgil Aeneid I.462
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Comments (4)
This felt like a very cerebral piece to me with a very powerful message with in. Great work!
makes me think of the many who only know dystopia as a reality. brilliant.
Ahh, totally brilliant!
This seemed very magical! I loved itA