Quiet in the House
You long desired: spider silk
Softly gathers dust.
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Rob Angeli
sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt
There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.
-Virgil Aeneid I.462
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Comments (6)
This was a great haiku with beautiful imagery! Great work R!
Amazing how so few words can tighten the heart strings
I Love Haiku! Really great job on this one– each syllable weighted with heaviness.
Thanks for the comment and insight! When you get a chance, check out my Bloody Mary story I have pinned. Reading some of your work, I think you would appreciate it.
Very melancholic! I loved it!
This evokes such emotion, well done!