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The Chaotic Mind

Random thoughts put into poem form

By Mo DarasiPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
The Chaotic Mind
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I swear I remember this

that and the other thing that flew past my vision

blurring past the system, confused

and on a mission in crowds unlocking wisdom

of life, but it’s seldom

clear.

-

Jumbling and humbling

ideas are just crumbling through cracks

or are they seeping through?

like goo from a monster’s maw

clutching at straws to draw

ferocious natures and gnaw

at life with eyes in awe.

-

Surprised at the outcome

like a song’s humdrum

after starting amazing and then some,

or a tv’s static screen that led some

to pull their hair out, broken and glum

-

cheer up and show the world a smile

if they give an inch then take a mile

of happiness that is.

Serenity and bliss.

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Author's note: I wanted to write a poem within 15 minutes while i was taking a short break from work, so I just started with a random thought, aiming only to rhyme the lines. Then decided to inspire the first line of each stanza with the last line of the previous one. A bit of a chaotic poem.

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About the Creator

Mo Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics.

Finding interesting ways to write a poem or hide messages within them seems to be my main interesting in writing now, and it's been fun

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    Written by Mo Darasi