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sweet 'n sour

inspired by the In Eclipse challenge

By Heather HublerPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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ebullient,

candy-floss

love

igniting

pleasure,

suffocating

envy

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Thank you for dropping by! I was playing around with this one for awhile, challenging myself to use one word per line and still have meaning. Whether it worked or not, I'm unsure, but I do know I want some cotton candy now, lol :)

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You can read all of my In Eclipse challenge entries so far in this compilation post!

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Heather Hubler

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  • Gina C.about a month ago

    Oooh, I love what you did here! So rich with so few words. This is just marvelous :)

  • Jazzy about a month ago

    I can say this really worked!! I love this so much!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Mmmm, now I want cotton candy too hehehehhee. Even better if it's the cotton candy ice cream from Baskin Robbins! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Deasun T. Smythabout a month ago

    Nice, this works well 👍.

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Love this sweet thing. I took it as you have your own sweet love so there's no need to envious.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    My only issue is not lack of meaning, its whether to interpret the suffocation as simply having something lovely stops me being envious, or whether others experience suffocating envy of the lovely thing.

  • JBazabout a month ago

    You’re always eclipsing my expectations …

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Lol..me want some candy floss too now! Or cotton candy...or whatever lol. This was...brilliant though...it did work very well! Well done, I and Fin Damn salute you, venti!

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