sweet 'n sour
inspired by the In Eclipse challenge
By Heather HublerPublished 14 days ago • 1 min read
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ebullient,
candy-floss
love
igniting
pleasure,
suffocating
envy
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Thank you for dropping by! I was playing around with this one for awhile, challenging myself to use one word per line and still have meaning. Whether it worked or not, I'm unsure, but I do know I want some cotton candy now, lol :)
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Comments (8)
Oooh, I love what you did here! So rich with so few words. This is just marvelous :)
I can say this really worked!! I love this so much!
Mmmm, now I want cotton candy too hehehehhee. Even better if it's the cotton candy ice cream from Baskin Robbins! Loved your Acrostic!
Nice, this works well 👍.
Love this sweet thing. I took it as you have your own sweet love so there's no need to envious.
My only issue is not lack of meaning, its whether to interpret the suffocation as simply having something lovely stops me being envious, or whether others experience suffocating envy of the lovely thing.
You’re always eclipsing my expectations …
Lol..me want some candy floss too now! Or cotton candy...or whatever lol. This was...brilliant though...it did work very well! Well done, I and Fin Damn salute you, venti!