Summer Love
A poem based on the song "Summertime Sadness" by Lana Del Ray
Swinging through the peachtree air,
in my onyx black frock dress,
like a child in the playground
on a warm and crispy
but sunless evening.
My eyes moves like turtles
as I see gray tumbles hiding,
in the dusty brown abyss,
like birds hiding in the nest.
I see the dark turquoise sky,
I face the clear quartz moon,
and ride like a country horse rider
on my flat wooden swing.
Country living,
dwelling in treehouses,
below the thick emerald weed,
I see myself as an petite damsel,
with hematite colored hair
and obsidian coloured lip paint
About the Creator
Talia Devora
Poetess, visual artist and lifestyle/quiz writer! My pastimes include reading, sleeping, gaming, music, fitness, etc! Be yourselves, be kind and value life! Let's connect and be friends!
My IG accounts: @tdwrites24 & @tdcreates97
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Loved the colours and metaphors used!