Strength
Happy Father’s Day
Read between the lines of a long lost story of dying dreams and how a young man could lift himself up
From the ground
Stretching the limits of historical tyranny
Of doing things differently
It was something out of an old epic
That he found the entire course of human evolution
In his core
In his arms, a soft embrace,
His new sword was drawn
His name on his back
And his children his true defense
The winning team of strength
The dreaded cacophony of his trampled holiday tree youth, crushed presents and no explanation but anger
He chooses to keep the trees lined up
He chooses a better story
To be a real man, a father with strength
And love.
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Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos,
I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels
The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella The Job and Atonement will be published this year by JMS Books
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Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. It’s evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay
The imagery of the "long lost story of dying dreams" and the young man lifting himself up from the ground evokes a powerful sense of resilience and determination, the idea of doing things differently and finding the course of human evolution within oneself adds depth to the narrative, we‘re deeply moved by the poem, loved it, and hope to read more of your work, thank you very much again for sharing this spiritual journey that touched our hearts, subscribed.
Well done on the top story!
Beautiful 🩷❤️🩷 Congratulations on Top story ☺️🌞!
Melissa, a wonderful tribute to dad. Awesome work.
What a lovely and impactful piece! The last few lines really leave a lasting impression, but all of your words (as ever) are so perfectly chosen and placed - it's wonderful. Congrats on a very well deserved Top Story!
Nice Poem. I chose a better story too
Congrats Top Story! lovely poem.
Gosh this was extremely powerful! Such brilliant and deep lines! I'm soooo happy you got a Top Story for this! Congratulations Merly! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊 I freaking loved it soooooo muchhhhhh!
'The dreaded cacophony of his trampled holiday tree youth, crushed presents and no explanation but anger' Really loved that line. Congrats, Melissa!
At first I was struggling to understand because of few words that I didn't know but I googled them and wow! Love it! Very powerful! I can feel the bond between you and your father. Congrats on top story!
Outstanding!! congratulation on TS
Love it just love it I mean this is superbly amazing
"Choose a better story." Yes. Congratulations 🥰
Congrats on TS, well deserved; lovely poem!!
so sweet ♥️
Happy Fathers Day! Dads who choose to be better for their kids are the strong ones, and the great educators.
Happy Fathers day and Congratulations on a beautiful tribute. Your final lines were emotionally powerful.
Heartfelt sentiments, Melissa. Missing my Dad still today. A unique strength defines Dads doesn't it? Congratulations on the top story!
Congratulations on Top Story! 🥳 Love it, and this line particularly: "he found the entire course of human evolution In his core"
Congratulations 🎉
Enjoy the Father’s Day. Lovely work from you!
nice
good
very emotional