Stop Distracting Me
I’m trying to focus! 😉
Drive away slow.
I hate to see you go…
Stop and turn around.
Take me to the backseat.
Rub your fingers through my hair.
Accept you’re not going anywhere just yet.
Cause we have unfinished business.
Throw my bra onto the floor…
It’s too big anyway.
Oh wait, I must go.
No more distractions.
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Real Poetic
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Miniature Mind Musings #8:
Recently, I spoke with a family member who I struggled to catch up with for a longer timespan than I would’ve liked and what struck me was how societal templates filled in on successive days routinely suck our time into a vacuum of seemingly infernal deficiency.
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Comments (13)
This was sultry and so good. This was a great entry.
Oh, succumbing to the distraction but then leaving the distraction there hanging! Haha, ouch, kinda hurt at the end. But this was so well done!
Oooh, some spice to this 🤗 Love it!!
Okay. 🤪 Wow. Sensuous! Well done ! 🥰
At first, I thought this was leading up to a tragedy. Well done! You might want to get better-fitting garments if they're too big for you lol
Good one❤️❗
Oh naughty naughty car ridey haha
Ooh a bit steamy! One good way to be distracted 😊
Seemed a nice distraction. Captivating poem! 💙Anneliese
excellent
I loved this. It's easy to put a bunch of interesting sounding words together to form an acrostic, but it's more difficult to create a cohesive narrative that fits the acrostic. I love your storytelling ability
AMAZING 💜
This is a steamy take on the acrostic challenge, and so well done!