Offline Everywhere
Except Vocal
I deleted instagram recently.
Haven’t had a Twitter in years…
I don’t need anyone keeping tabs on me.
Commenting that I’m pretty—
While hungry to see me tear.
But never around when I need
Someone to watch my rear.
It’s funny how it’s rare for someone
To tell the truth.
We live in times where so many live a lie.
We all lie though—
Straight to everyone’s face and say
We’re fine…
That’s why I spend my time in nature.
Jumping on the rocks in the creek.
Staring up at the peak of the mountain.
I’d rather see the world from this view…
Than through a screen.
I feel connected to the earth.
It’s in my gene.
Thank you for reading! 🤎
About the Creator
Real Poetic
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I write poetry & short stories.
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Comments (6)
I’d rather see the world from this view too ❤️🙏✨
I do not have any social media anymore, and I prefer it to having it. Great poem!!
So true to today's life and society. Great job!
That's awesome... Sometimes you just have to break away to see where you really are and where you want to be. I used to live in Colorado. The mountains were amazing. Hearted and subscribed.
So true ✨💯
You make great points! Life through a screen is a lonely existence. Well done!