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Poem...Story...Something
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-damn
apes
(when-will-enough-be)
misfires,
japes
crisp id.eals
mistakes,
rapes
-damn
apes
(when-will-enough-be-enough)
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fire-brand,
s-c-rapes
smooth moves
high stakes
low blows
coked nose
(the-venom-courses)
elim-i-nation
crim-i-nation
pupil die-lation
how many
tell me
how many
tie-mess
(the-venom-courses-through)
will we
hear the same
old same old
noises
coming from
the mouths
of serpents
(drink-the-venom-cursed-apes)
hottake, spittake
nosebleed, nooseneed
sowseed, newbreed
terrifying, horrifying
devoidofanythingapproachinghuman-and-kind
suspicious, duplicitous
theliespileshi-end-hi-def-ignition-the-fire
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Author's Notes: Just something I was playing around with. It's almost like a poem or story from a disenfranchised near-future group of resistors...with an interjected/intercepted piece of governmental warning. Yeah.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!
https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com
Comments (11)
My friggin head is spinning. Lol. This is wild. And it works! Well done.
Not to mention a little Max Headroom. Though talking about apes when referring to this mess we've made is a bit unfair to the apes. We may have common ancestors, but apes are not responsible for our mistakes.
Ps ~ P.S.- Will I be needing a clutch, then to engage this. Jk
This is great, so utterly jarring!
Lol, I accidentally read coked nose as cooked nose 🤣🤣🤣 Loved this poem!
Paul! I was halfway through this poem till I caught the rhythm and realized you'd gone full-blown gangsta rap on this one. Once that happened, I heard the rapping and was transported! It has the fire, rage and passion of the best of Eminem. Really awesome poetry!
We interrupt this broadcast to bring You Paul Stewart's accidentally stumbling into poetical formatting greatness with unparalleled rhythm, yet again. So much food for thought, it's a buffet until Your mind is incapable of holding it all in, but You won't be needing doggie bags for Your brains, but maybe an antacid.
Resistance
I am in the Resistance!! I’m there! Loved it. 💪🏽😀
This was like a surreal experimental rap and I mean that in a good way. Disjointed and then rhythmic and then all distorted on the page, this was messing with my head!
A poem coming straight out of the future