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Poem...Story...Something

By Paul StewartPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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-damn

apes

(when-will-enough-be)

misfires,

japes

crisp id.eals

mistakes,

rapes

-damn

apes

(when-will-enough-be-enough)

WE-.-INTERRUPT-.-THIS-.-MALICIOUS-.-BROADCAST-.-TO-OFFFER-.-THIS-.-ENTREATY-.-OF-.-OBEDIENCE-.-THERE-.-IS-.-NO-.-N.#EED-.-TO-.-FEAR-.-US-.-WE-.-WILL-.-NOT-BE-YOU.RD.ESTROYER#S--.--

fire-brand,

s-c-rapes

smooth moves

high stakes

low blows

coked nose

(the-venom-courses)

elim-i-nation

crim-i-nation

pupil die-lation

how many

tell me

how many

tie-mess

(the-venom-courses-through)

will we

hear the same

old same old

noises

coming from

the mouths

of serpents

(drink-the-venom-cursed-apes)

hottake, spittake

nosebleed, nooseneed

sowseed, newbreed

terrifying, horrifying

devoidofanythingapproachinghuman-and-kind

suspicious, duplicitous

theliespileshi-end-hi-def-ignition-the-fire

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Author's Notes: Just something I was playing around with. It's almost like a poem or story from a disenfranchised near-future group of resistors...with an interjected/intercepted piece of governmental warning. Yeah.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    My friggin head is spinning. Lol. This is wild. And it works! Well done.

  • Not to mention a little Max Headroom. Though talking about apes when referring to this mess we've made is a bit unfair to the apes. We may have common ancestors, but apes are not responsible for our mistakes.

  • Jay Kantorabout a month ago

    Ps ~ P.S.- Will I be needing a clutch, then to engage this. Jk

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    This is great, so utterly jarring!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Lol, I accidentally read coked nose as cooked nose 🤣🤣🤣 Loved this poem!

  • John Coxabout a month ago

    Paul! I was halfway through this poem till I caught the rhythm and realized you'd gone full-blown gangsta rap on this one. Once that happened, I heard the rapping and was transported! It has the fire, rage and passion of the best of Eminem. Really awesome poetry!

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a month ago

    We interrupt this broadcast to bring You Paul Stewart's accidentally stumbling into poetical formatting greatness with unparalleled rhythm, yet again. So much food for thought, it's a buffet until Your mind is incapable of holding it all in, but You won't be needing doggie bags for Your brains, but maybe an antacid.

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a month ago

    Resistance

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    I am in the Resistance!! I’m there! Loved it. 💪🏽😀

  • Rachel Deemingabout a month ago

    This was like a surreal experimental rap and I mean that in a good way. Disjointed and then rhythmic and then all distorted on the page, this was messing with my head!

  • Allwyn Roman Waghelaabout a month ago

    A poem coming straight out of the future

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