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whr r th vwls

viva la revolution...

By Paul StewartPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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whr r th vwls
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whr r th vwls

dstryd n cnflct

frgt th nrm

frg th stndrd

dcphr th cd

whts th gl

qstn vrythng

ths s nt drll

ths s th rvltn

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Author's Notes: Viva la revolución?

surreal poetrysocial commentaryperformance poetryinspirationalfact or fictionart
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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 months ago

    Destroyed or not yet invented? This was the original norm with Hebrew. No vowels, only consonants. Love it!

  • LOL at this comment section 😂🤣😂🤣 Loved the creativity and the poem here Paul!

  • I wonder what was the "gl". All my brain could come up with was glue 🤣🤣🤣🎉🤣🤣 Ths ws vry Pltcl pm hhhhhhhhhh

  • John Cox2 months ago

    Loved decoding this. Ordinarily I would be tempted to comment in consonants, but I honestly don't think I can top the many commenters who did. Boy did they ever make me laugh!

  • Ww!😃 Mzng t rd nd thn wrt cmmnt ths wy! Xcllnt!

  • Rene Peters2 months ago

    Wh ws ths sy t rd?

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler2 months ago

    Vry clvr, Pl!

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    tht ws hll f lt f fn t rd!

  • D.K. Shepard2 months ago

    Mzng! Ths ws sch fn rd!

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh2 months ago

    And/Or... this is the revelation?? So clever and energizing!

  • Pl, y hv nc gn ht th nl n th hd! Wll dn!

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    Frg for me. Forge, forgo?

  • Rachel Deeming2 months ago

    Only Connect! I only had trouble with one line which was whts th gl - I Don't know that last word. Glue? Gel? Ogle? Oh man, I'm way off.

  • probably a top story and an excellent concept, as well as being great fun

  • Gerard DiLeo2 months ago

    Y wst tm n vwls? Ct 2 th chs, rght? Gnn mv m'vwls, nw. Bg vwl mvmnt!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Oh, that is brilliant and I happy to say, I could read it. Well done. Screw the vowels.

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