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Sprung

If only in my Daydreams then I'll hold you near...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 10 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Sprung
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The best ideas fly freely,

You are my favorite, introspection of the day.

The reason why,

I feel like, Dancing.

I know that,

I am sprung on you.

We go to the Moon-πŸŒ•

Never back to earth,

I just float in your Universe.

When I'm not sleeping,
I Daydream of you...

Your Voice

Your Smell

And Dear

Sweet Face 😍

love poems
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About the Creator

HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

Welcome to β€œMy Public Diary β€œπŸ€ͺπŸ’–

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    Daydreams are like the best thing ever! Loved your poem!

  • Dreamily dreaming whether awake or asleep. I've been lost there before. It's both wonderful & torturous.

  • Colleen Millsteed 10 months ago

    Your romantic side is showing again my friend.

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    As always, beautiful lines!!! Loving it!!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Tiffany Gordon 10 months ago

    Aww... that was so sweet! Beautifully done lil bro!!!!

  • Rob Angeli10 months ago

    What a perfect love poem, short and sweet as can be. Love the colors of your writing!

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Beautiful poem. Well done, as always.

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Bravo, Handsome. Wonderfully written. Sincerely, Mother

  • Test10 months ago

    very nice

  • Phil Flannery10 months ago

    Always good to read your poems

  • Donna Renee10 months ago

    β€œWhen I’m not sleeping, I daydream of you” 😭😭❀️ gorgeous

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