Sprung
If only in my Daydreams then I'll hold you near...
The best ideas fly freely,
You are my favorite, introspection of the day.
The reason why,
I feel like, Dancing.
I know that,
I am sprung on you.
We go to the Moon-π
Never back to earth,
I just float in your Universe.
When I'm not sleeping,
I Daydream of you...
Your Voice
Your Smell
And Dear
Sweet Face π
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Comments (12)
Daydreams are like the best thing ever! Loved your poem!
Dreamily dreaming whether awake or asleep. I've been lost there before. It's both wonderful & torturous.
Your romantic side is showing again my friend.
As always, beautiful lines!!! Loving it!!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Aww... that was so sweet! Beautifully done lil bro!!!!
What a perfect love poem, short and sweet as can be. Love the colors of your writing!
Beautiful poem. Well done, as always.
Beautiful. π©΅
Bravo, Handsome. Wonderfully written. Sincerely, Mother
very nice
Always good to read your poems
βWhen Iβm not sleeping, I daydream of youβ ππβ€οΈ gorgeous