Sometimes Nothing IS - All There Is
Empty
I tried to write it all down,
but the words were being evasive.
Describe my feelings, during the meltdown.
but my mood, only got in the way.
I tried to be clever and witty,
but sarcasm ran through my head.
I tried to fill up the page,
but it chose to remain empty instead.
I turned on some tunes to get focused,
opened the window, and let in the breeze.
The words offered me peace, and a bonus,
my soul felt renewed and at ease.
I thought of words kind and uplifting,
some words that stirred horror and rage.
I tried once again to write it down on the page,
but it chose to stay empty, instead.
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Kelli, I really Enjoyed the story! in fact excellent!
Yes exactly this to the nth degree! Quite often the words have a will of their own! A brilliant piece! And congrats on TS!
I think a large part of the writer's life is the "empty" or "nothing" that rears it's ugly head. This is a great piece! You really brought this struggle to life!
Ever since reading a cartoon about 20-20 hindsight (1st frame, couple lying in bed, she accuses him of having 20-20 hindsight; 2nd frame, he objects, insisting, "I do not!"; 3rd frame, she's asleep, he's stewing, thinking to himself, "When she said I had 20-20 hindsight, I should have said...."), I've decided that's what I have--only I've discovered that not even my hindsight is 20-20! Sometimes I'm thankful for that, still being allowed to relish the saucy bit of sarcastic wit without actually having said it. But when it's affirmation or something positive, I still wish....
ποΈπΆβ¨ Don't worry, sometimes the words may seem elusive, but that doesn't define your creativity. Embrace the mood and let your feelings flow. Remember, even in the empty spaces, there is room for renewal and peace. π¬οΈβ¨π Keep exploring different avenues, like music and nature, to find inspiration. Your words will find their way back, filling the page with kindness, upliftment, and emotions that stir. ππ«π Stay patient and keep expressing yourselfβthe journey of writing is as important as the destination. Keep shining! β¨πΌπ
Congratulations on your Top Story Kelli !!!
Simple words. Wow !
Congrats
Congrats :)
Soooo relatable! Congrats on TS, well-deserved :)
Perfect title for a very relatable poem. Congrats, Kelli!
Congratulations on your Top Storyβ€οΈππ―ππππ
Oh, I can relate...
The blank page... I've actually had nightmares about it before XD Loved this piece :)
Your article has deeply touched me, and I would like to express my gratitude to you once again. If possible, could you guide me on how to write a story?
Yay - Congrats on Top Story!
I relate to this one! π©β€οΈ congrats on your Top Story!
Sometimes this happens. π Very nice - love the flow!
Very well said, Kelli! I've felt this way so many times π₯²
Well Kelli, you just perfectly described how a lot of us writers feel. Sometimes it is a difficult struggle to find the words.
Dear Kelli ~ Ah, the power of the pen ~ May I offer a suggestion? I often leave the writing to my 'Alter-Ego' where Ideas flow through me as my fingers do the work - saves all of the mental fret-stress - Just joking; or am I. I so admire you work - don't "Fret" about it Jay Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -
Awesome π β€οΈ
Don't eat the book though, but I relate and agree with your poem. As usual, Kelli, you always have your fingers on the pulse that we are all thinking!
Well said, Kelli. In fact, I can't say it any better than you did with your title. Well done!