Second Glance
a poem
Butterflies can’t compare
To the ocean–
.
A gravity deeper than the sea
Pulled in toward the earth
.
When you look at me
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Butterflies can’t compare
To the ocean–
.
A gravity deeper than the sea
Pulled in toward the earth
.
When you look at me
Comments (11)
Congrats on Top Story! :)
Nice Work. I enjoyed your poem very much. Let me know your thoughts on my work, open to constuctive feedback.
Short and powerful!! Congrats on the top story!
Oops, contest on TS🎉🫶🏻
Beautiful!! Simple and perfect. 😍
Oh, this is beautiful. I really love it 🥹
Beautiful work!
Congratulations on top story!!
Short, but astounding. Beautifully written, Joelle!
Love the power of this, excellent!
Lovely and powerful end!!