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SILENCE

Take Comfort In

By Babs IversonPublished 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
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SILENCE
Photo by Rae Galatas on Unsplash

Silence after,

being on the run.

Shopping is done.

Wrapping fun.

Bets won.

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Take comfort in.

Reflecting in the glow.

Thoughts of snow.

School's show.

Cookie dough.

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Take comfort in.

A vintage souvenir.

Holiday cheer.

Loved ones near.

Reflecting on another year.

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Take comfort in.

The scent of pine.

A sip of wine.

Music divine.

Lives intertwined.

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Take comfort in.

Cinnamon spice.

Turkey advise.

Skating on ice.

Christmas mice.

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Take comfort in.

Joyful hearts.

Cherry tarts.

Beginning arts.

New starts.

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Take Comfort in.

Cards and letters.

Warm sweaters.

Not being debtors

but abettors.

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Comfort and Joy during the Holiday Season.

Take Comfort in the Silence.

Writer's notes: SILENCE is being submitted to the Get Comfortable Challenge. Get Comfortable during the Holidays. Thank you for reading. You are appreciated.

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Loved this ❀️ Love that feeling of enjoying the holidays when " the stuff" is done

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    NiceπŸ’–

  • It's my favorite time of year, reflecting on those comfort zones it brings was so nice.

  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    Great structure here. Well done!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    My favorite time of year!! I felt all the comfort in this one. Great work :)

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I'm comforted. Thanks.

  • Sandra Tena Cole2 years ago

    SoothingπŸ’—

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Rather touching...

  • Absolutely loved this! 😍

  • Jason Provencio2 years ago

    Bravo, Babs! Well done! &:^)

  • Lightning Bolt2 years ago

    ❀️❀️❀️‼️‼️

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is beautiful, and very comforting

  • A wonderful feeling of calm comes from this

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    ❀️πŸ₯°Love it

  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    Wonderful poem, Babs! This brought back many wonderful holiday memories for me. I also loved the way you structured the poem.

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