Silence after,
being on the run.
Shopping is done.
Wrapping fun.
Bets won.
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Take comfort in.
Reflecting in the glow.
Thoughts of snow.
School's show.
Cookie dough.
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Take comfort in.
A vintage souvenir.
Holiday cheer.
Loved ones near.
Reflecting on another year.
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Take comfort in.
The scent of pine.
A sip of wine.
Music divine.
Lives intertwined.
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Take comfort in.
Cinnamon spice.
Turkey advise.
Skating on ice.
Christmas mice.
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Take comfort in.
Joyful hearts.
Cherry tarts.
Beginning arts.
New starts.
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Take Comfort in.
Cards and letters.
Warm sweaters.
Not being debtors
but abettors.
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Comfort and Joy during the Holiday Season.
Take Comfort in the Silence.
Writer's notes: SILENCE is being submitted to the Get Comfortable Challenge. Get Comfortable during the Holidays. Thank you for reading. You are appreciated.
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Comments (15)
Loved this β€οΈ Love that feeling of enjoying the holidays when " the stuff" is done
Niceπ
It's my favorite time of year, reflecting on those comfort zones it brings was so nice.
Great structure here. Well done!
My favorite time of year!! I felt all the comfort in this one. Great work :)
I'm comforted. Thanks.
Soothingπ
Rather touching...
Absolutely loved this! π
Bravo, Babs! Well done! &:^)
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This is beautiful, and very comforting
A wonderful feeling of calm comes from this
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Wonderful poem, Babs! This brought back many wonderful holiday memories for me. I also loved the way you structured the poem.