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She cries in her dream of forest

Lost cubs

By KodahPublished 19 days ago โ€ข 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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She wishes not to wake up. Not to wake up from this lucid dream where the sounds of her own private wars are echoing the battles of men before her and near her.

She wishes to enlighten the moment when she finally finds her lost cubs. They must've hidden away thinking it was hide and seek. They could be somewhere in this enchanted forest...

She looks for the cubs, but they are nowhere to be seen. She wanders in the depths of the mythical forest where the unrealistic beings hide from the real world of judgment.

She feels hopeless though. She feels lost to her knees. She's weakening...

She can't control the feeling taking over her body. The feeling has won.

All she can do is lay there hopelessly...

Lay there while living in past regrets.

She cries herself to sleep...

Or awake~

But what is that in the distance?

A cub,

Another cub,

Another, another cub.

Tumbling out from the leafy green bush.

They assert to their mother,

Comforting her,

Snuggling against her warm, fuzzy coat,

Drawing solace from her peaceful presence.

She is now awake.

Awaken from her wildest dreams,

She feels the warmth from her babies,

Her dreams came true~

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Authors Notes:

Thank you so much for reading my poem!

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About the Creator

Kodah

- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical

~๐“ข๐“ฝ๐“ธ๐“ป๐“ฒ๐“ฎ๐“ผ ๐“ฌ๐“ช๐“ท ๐“ซ๐“ฎ ๐“ช ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ฝ๐“ฝ๐“ต๐“ฎ ๐“ญ๐“ฎ๐“ฎ๐“น~

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Outstanding

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  3. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

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  • olymoollaa day ago

    You write very well please visit my vocal id and leave a comment about how I write stories and how I write stories

  • Anna 6 days ago

    Congrats on TS!๐Ÿฅณ

  • Naveed 12 days ago

    Admirable job! Keep up the exceptional workโ€”congrats!

  • Annetta Brown15 days ago

    Love this.

  • Ha Le Sa16 days ago

    I really enjoyed reading your story. this is awesome!

  • Kimmiekins416 days ago

    Congratulations on top story!! This was beautifully written!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ

  • Babs Iverson16 days ago

    Brilliant!!! Loved it!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!๐Ÿ’•โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

  • Cathy holmes16 days ago

    Beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.

  • Gerald Holmes16 days ago

    This is simply beautiful! Your words flow like magic here. Very well done. Congrats on a well deserved Top Story.

  • JBaz16 days ago

    I love that you gave voice to animals, feelings and depth to their existence. Well done, and beautiful written. Congratulations

  • Carol Townend16 days ago

    This is an outstanding piece of work. It shows that animals do have feelings when it comes to their young ones, just like humans. It is warm and touching. You can really feel the mother's emotions. I love this piece.

  • Billy lewis18 days ago

    Beautiful work Kodah!!

  • very good

  • This was so wholesome and heartwarming! Loved your poem so much!

  • Carrie 19 days ago

    Kodah your art to describe stories is phenomenal ๐Ÿ’•

  • Jade Loson19 days ago

    This was such a captivating and interesting story Kodah!

  • Hannah Moore19 days ago

    Poor mummy, what a dream.

  • Novel Allen19 days ago

    From the depth of hopelessness and misery to success and rejoicing, very well read Kodah.

  • Naveed 19 days ago

    Fascinating

  • Lunaverse19 days ago

    I have no words. Such a beautiful poetry to describe the storyโค๏ธ

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