We went from best friends to strangers,
Isn't it crazy how growing up changed us?
Change must be scary for a person...
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"You were a wonderful experience,"
You were my everything~
I don't want to be a candle in your light.....
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Did you take my sadness out of context,
Or was I just too complex?
Maybe I'm just too much for some people....
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Nothing gold can stay,
Just like how you couldn't~
Proving I'm not good enough...
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Were you too much to ask for,
Or was I just becoming attached to you?
Nothing I do will ever be right...
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I'm here,
But your not...
You never really were.
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A shadow can peak,
And I could still not see you.
Maybe your just in my head now.
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From one more day,
I wish to be just like before.
Please bring back the past~
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Authors Notes:
Thank you for reading my poem!! ๐
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical
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Comments (5)
So full of sadness.
This was soooo heartbreakingly relatable! Every line hit me so hard as I've experienced this exact thing before. So sorry you're experiencing this. Sending you lots of love and hugs ๐ฅบโค๏ธ
Oh, this is so beautiful and heartbreaking. The line, "Did you take my sadness out of context, or was I just too complex?" is so eloquently put. You unpack so many feelings in this piece. Beautifully done ๐๐๐
Beautiful
Amazing. I loved it