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Rock Bottom

In a world of the unknown, I scoured for a place to build a home…

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 6 months ago Updated 6 months ago 1 min read
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Rock Bottom
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Although I hit rock bottom

I held my head high

I managed to smile but still cried…

I felt lost in a world of Jurrasic,

With Strange Creatures, that wouldn't die…

Up & Out of that hole 🕳️,

I crawled because I had Life…

I struggled with giving up the Dream

Of you and I…

Lonely and Scared

I vowed,

I will Survive!

Although the enemy

Portrayed to be a friend,

I shared my Love

Greatly from within…

Sudden spells began,

Hauling me into the Dark

But still, I made it to the Light…

Desolate Feelings &

Cold withered

Hearts Cry at Night…

For a moment I thought to myself: “ This Can't be my life.”

I slept next to a Demon, while Angels whispered in my ear…

Letting me know that My Blessings were near…

I don't remember your face, but I recollect that place.

With my last bit of Hope, I implored the Lord to take me from the Waste,

I didn't desire to Race…

I may have been at the Bottom

But Still, I Smiled

Because I Had Too…

I Ought To…

I Must Smile 😊,

Because With Every Smile Comes Hope 🙏

Authors Note: I am a poet, but sometimes it is hard for me to get Deep 📝🥹💯 I am not infallible if, I want to share with the world 🌎 a story so vulnerable yet full of power 🔋 🔌 but here is a piece of me…

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  • The Invisible Writer6 months ago

    When I saw the picture for this I had to read it. The words that followed didn't disappoint incredibly well done Lonzo. Insightful and deep

  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    Well you made back from the emotional rock bottom in many ways. Good work.

  • You're on a roll lately with your writing. Well done, this is another great one!

  • The Dani Writer6 months ago

    Lonzo that was a gut-wrencher! Immensely relatable, and I feel you on that sharing at depths. Feel ya big time.

  • River Joy6 months ago

    Really well done. I know the feeling, the crawl back from rock bottom is so very rewarding . ♥️

  • Rasma Raisters6 months ago

    Nicely penned and creative and your ending is spot on, it made me smile.

  • Nicely done. Good work.

  • Lamar Wiggins6 months ago

    Ahh, the words just kept coming and the feelings kept amplifying. Really great work, bro. 💖💖💖

  • Tressa Rose6 months ago

    I felt this for real. Great job

  • Teresa Renton6 months ago

    Well done for sharing this. Love the spark of hope that you fling on to. ❤️

  • Leslie Writes6 months ago

    👏 This is one of your best! 💖

  • Catherine Nyomenda6 months ago

    This poem reminds me of how it feels to hit rock bottom, dust yourself, and still rise. Great poem!

  • From rock bottom you might as well smile, my friend. You have no where to go but up.

  • Whoaaaa, this was so poignant and powerful! I freaking loved it!

  • Deasun T. Smyth6 months ago

    Nice 💯👍😁

  • Sugan Ya 6 months ago

    One of the Great piece of your poem! fantastic...I Loved it...

  • Shirley Belk6 months ago

    Painful but beautiful! One of your best!

  • Real Poetic6 months ago

    My heart broke as I read this. My favorite from you so far! “For a Moment I thought to myself: “This Can't be my life.” I’ve been there and I’m so glad you chose to smile through the pain! It makes you stronger. 🩵👏🏼 You beautifully expressed what it’s like to let go of toxic relationships. Impactful poem.

  • Veronica Coldiron6 months ago

    What an amazing tale of perseverance! 😍💗

  • Cathy holmes6 months ago

    Thisbis beautiful. Love it.

  • Mariann Carroll6 months ago

    Beautiful, Dont rush true love. It will come at its special time when you are ready

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    I love this one! Very inspirational! Great job Lonzo!! ☺️👏👏

  • Test6 months ago

    fantastic

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