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Across the sky they fly into the ocean ๐ŸŒŠ

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 6 months ago โ€ข Updated 6 months ago โ€ข 1 min read

Not all stars are in the skyโ€ฆ

Some stars have been ground-level

Living with usโ€ฆ

Staying away from the dustโ€ฆ

They live inside the Everglades,

Making Friends with Mermaidsโ€ฆ

Some people say their light went out,

But I think underneath the surface they shine Bright!

The shooting star, We see, but never know where they go-

I found the secret, they fly across the sky to come and take a diveโ€ฆ

The moment they touch the water, ๐ŸŒŠ

They become alive- ๐ŸŒŸ

No more do they wish to be higher than us,

Some just want to Dance in lust!

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  • ThatWriterWoman6 months ago

    I love the idea that fallen stars become starfish!! That's awesome!

  • Poetic fantasy come to earth.

  • Novel Allen6 months ago

    Wow! Wonderful vision of stars falling into the oceans and impacting our lives. I love this poem a lot.

  • Kristen Balyeat6 months ago

    I love this so much! What a magical piece, Lonzo! ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ซโญ๏ธ

  • ๐Ÿ’ซ๐ŸŒŸโœจ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’ซโœจ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’ซโœจ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’ซโœจ

  • Well done, my friend!!!

  • This was so magnificent! So beautifully written!

  • Wow ๐Ÿคฉ Beautiful โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโœจ Lovely creatures and fun too๐Ÿ˜Œ

  • Tiffany Gordon 6 months ago


  • Alex H Mittelman 6 months ago

    I love it! This is fantastic! ๐Ÿ’™

  • Andrea Corwin 6 months ago

    Oh, this so wonderful, I LOVE it! ๐Ÿ’• Great job!

  • Catherine Nyomenda6 months ago

    Beautiful โคโค๐Ÿ’‹

  • Darkos6 months ago

    haha, Great You are Fantastic :)โค๏ธโค๏ธ

  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    A fun idea, Lonzo! Such amazing creatures, and pretty close to an alien life form.

  • Mother Combs6 months ago


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