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Across the sky they fly into the ocean 🌊

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read

Not all stars are in the sky…

Some stars have been ground-level

Living with us…

Staying away from the dust…

They live inside the Everglades,

Making Friends with Mermaids…

Some people say their light went out,

But I think underneath the surface they shine Bright!

The shooting star, We see, but never know where they go-

I found the secret, they fly across the sky to come and take a dive…

The moment they touch the water, 🌊

They become alive- 🌟

No more do they wish to be higher than us,

Some just want to Dance in lust!

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Comments (16)

  • ThatWriterWoman9 months ago

    I love the idea that fallen stars become starfish!! That's awesome!

  • Poetic fantasy come to earth.

  • Novel Allen9 months ago

    Wow! Wonderful vision of stars falling into the oceans and impacting our lives. I love this poem a lot.

  • Kristen Balyeat9 months ago

    I love this so much! What a magical piece, Lonzo! 💞💫⭐️

  • 💫🌟✨🌟💫✨🌟💫✨🌟💫✨

  • Well done, my friend!!!

  • This was so magnificent! So beautifully written!

  • Wow 🤩 Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️✨ Lovely creatures and fun too😌

  • Tiffany Gordon 9 months ago

    Beautiful!

  • Alex H Mittelman 9 months ago

    I love it! This is fantastic! 💙

  • Andrea Corwin 9 months ago

    Oh, this so wonderful, I LOVE it! 💕 Great job!

  • Catherine Nyomenda9 months ago

    Beautiful ❤❤💋

  • Darkos9 months ago

    haha, Great You are Fantastic :)❤️❤️

  • Dana Crandell9 months ago

    A fun idea, Lonzo! Such amazing creatures, and pretty close to an alien life form.

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    Lovely!

HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Written by HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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