Stars
Across the sky they fly into the ocean ๐
Not all stars are in the skyโฆ
Some stars have been ground-level
Living with usโฆ
Staying away from the dustโฆ
They live inside the Everglades,
Making Friends with Mermaidsโฆ
Some people say their light went out,
But I think underneath the surface they shine Bright!
The shooting star, We see, but never know where they go-
I found the secret, they fly across the sky to come and take a diveโฆ
The moment they touch the water, ๐
They become alive- ๐
No more do they wish to be higher than us,
Some just want to Dance in lust!
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Comments (16)
I love the idea that fallen stars become starfish!! That's awesome!
Poetic fantasy come to earth.
Wow! Wonderful vision of stars falling into the oceans and impacting our lives. I love this poem a lot.
I love this so much! What a magical piece, Lonzo! ๐๐ซโญ๏ธ
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Well done, my friend!!!
This was so magnificent! So beautifully written!
Wow ๐คฉ Beautiful โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโจ Lovely creatures and fun too๐
Beautiful!
I love it! This is fantastic! ๐
Oh, this so wonderful, I LOVE it! ๐ Great job!
A fun and clever and beautiful idea ๐Anneliese
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haha, Great You are Fantastic :)โค๏ธโค๏ธ
A fun idea, Lonzo! Such amazing creatures, and pretty close to an alien life form.
Lovely!