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Real Love

Disclaimer: contains coarse language and mention of adult substances.

By Donna Fox (HKB)Published 9 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Real Love
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Hold my beer,

Imma kick his ass.

He can’t talk to you like that....

Authors Note:

I think real love is knowing you can hand off your beer to someone and they won't drink it or that they'll get you a refill if they do! πŸ’œ

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Donna Fox (HKB)

Thank you for your support and feedback! πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œ

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  • Naveed Ahmed8 months ago

    This was so amazing! Beautiful choice of words!

  • Valentina Savage8 months ago

    Well written! I hope you like my latest storie. Take a look if you want.

  • Novel Allen9 months ago

    Careful who you give your beer to, they might roofie you. Can't believe I missed all this good stuff over here. It is those darned challenges. So many new people to try to read a story or two. Hope all is well. Miss your voice.

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Oh yeah! That's love. Lol.

  • Dana Crandell9 months ago

    <---This guy has been both the designated holder and the enruster on various occasions. It definitely requires trust.

  • Alexander McEvoy9 months ago

    More than once a friend of mine has said "hold my beer" then gone to do something. Normally mine is already finished so if there's more in the fridge, I'll finish theirs can pull out a fresh one for when they get back lol

  • Naomi Gold9 months ago

    Not a beer drinker, but I think those who love you will always have your back. When people don’t defend me, I know they’re not my people. Love is protective.

  • Mackenzie Davis9 months ago

    Lol, love this! Short and very sweet! The story beyond it is fun to imagine.

  • Ohhhhhh. I thought you were gonna say true love is when you give your beer to someone to hold while to beat up the person whos spoke rudely to the person you love πŸ˜…

  • True love is they’ll set that beer down if they think you need the help. This was definitely short and sweet lol almost like a Haiku. Loved it though great as always Donna

  • Gerald Holmes9 months ago

    Love it. Everybody should have a few people they can trust to hold their beer.

  • J. S. Wade9 months ago

    Okay. Here’s a coupon, redeemable anytime. HOLD MY BEER - (no expiration) Good one, Donna !! 😎

  • Rachel Deeming9 months ago

    I have a dear Canadian friend who this sums up. Imma gonna share it with her. Love your stuff, Donna!

  • Donna Renee9 months ago

    ❀️ I love it!! It’s so short but tells a huge story! Friends like that are the best! 😁😁

  • Real Poetic9 months ago

    Lol I’m totally this friend!

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