Quiddity II
More Time In The Dream Sea With My Muse
Nine months ago I wrote a poem called Quiddity for my Muse. The explanation of Quiddity is in that poem.
Tonight I was talking with my Muse and thought I would revisit Quiddity with her once again.
Quiddity II
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Let Us Be Together In This Dream Sea
The Warmth Of This Magic Will Surround Us
Our Hearts Will Be Lifted, Our Souls Fly Free
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In Coral Caves, Such Wonders We Will See
Creatures We Thought Myth, Mermaids And Selkies
Let Us Be Together In This Dream Sea
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To Lay With You, Experience Quiddity
The Here, The Now, We Are Sharing Our Love
Our Hearts Will Be Lifted, Our Souls Fly Free
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In This Magical Place, Just You And Me
Seeing Beauty In Us, Heaven Above
Let Us Be Together In This Dream Sea
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I Look In Your Eyes, Such Wonder I See
Soulmates We Are, In This Sea Of True Love
Our Hearts Will Be Lifted, Our Souls Fly Free
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Holding Each Other Close, So Lovingly
Quiddity's Flowing Waves Soothing Our Souls
Let Us Be Together In This Dream Sea
Our Hearts Will Be Lifted, Our Souls Fly Free
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Comments (9)
Gorgeous poem Mike! As a chronic daydreamer myself, this poem is so relatable to me! I imagine similar things, but with male celebrities and mythical creatures!
This is beautiful, Mike. Well done.
I love how gentle this is, Beautifully done š¤
Lovely as always, Mike. (I love ELO and read your earlier post.)
Seeing beauty in us, heaven above. I loved that line so much! Such a beautiful poem!
Quiddity, liquidity, fluidity, all expressed in a single villanelle. Well done, Mike.
I enjoyed this one for sure!! The dream sea for when you can not be together.ā¤ļø
I really feel the vibes of Rose and Jack from the Titanic film from this.
Beautifully expressed and loved it!!!šā¤ļøā¤ļø