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they find her lacking,
forgettable as always,
brushed into the past.
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Comments (11)
Spot on capture 😍
Ouch, this was piercing. Nice job.
Wow, this is wonderful.
Excellent Senryū and perfect description of me
Sensational senryu!!! 💕❤️❤️ Sending virtual hugs!!!
Yes, people would only remember us if they can use as to their advantage. After that, we're history to them. I'm sorry my sweet looner partner 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Painfully lovely. We often don't 'see' the people we don't want to see. Very, very sad. Excellent and meaningful Haiku, Heather!
A prosaic mosaic. But anyone who finds you lacking should be watching out for the folks in white coats carrying a straight jacket, Heather.
It's crazy to me how people are sometimes. So dismissive towards others. How hard is it to look at someone and find meaning in their existence?
Sounds like she feels she'd never be missed. I can relate, some days and I'd like to give her a hug.
11 stunning, sad-filled words that say so much. Well done.