Photo by Monika Kozub on Unsplash
Jacket tied on waist,
Standing in the empty train -
Bargaining with blood.
About the Creator
Suze Kay
Pastry chef by day, insomniac writer by night.
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Comments (9)
Somehow I missed this one! I have to say that cover photo made me squirm from discomfort😂 I think every female has a personal horror story to share on this topic haha. But it’s almost as bad when everything is actually under control and your imagination makes you think it looks like a whole murder scene on your pants which I’m sure we can all also relate to😂 Anyway, great entry! I loved that last line, it sounds like a song or book title or something.
Oh, those moments are HORRIBLE! Bargaining with blood, what a good way to put it xx
this is how you do a senryū! Mic drop, Suze!
At the most unexpected and inconvenient moment, she arrives uninvited 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Omg! That cover photo! This one is so raw, but I laughed at how relatable it is. Great one, Suze.
Oh, no!
Hi Suze 'Q' ~ As Elvis once said, "You've got a lot of nerve Girl" - Hard to wrap a male-head around this - But, I always so GiT-U with pleasure on my porch! j-bud
I am so glad that's not something I have to deal with. Funny, I just mentioned a coupe of days ago that I have loaned my jacket on occasion. Great entry!
I think all of us can relate to this, speaking of this actually happened to me in Paris...and I lost my luggage...great poem!