Overland Pass
The road less traveled
The following poem is as it was originally published to Poets on Vocal.Media in 2021. A newer version has been posted in 2024 with added verses to achieve the Challenge's required length of exactly 250 words.
you tried
last thing
wasn’t music
or I love you
or are we there yet?
last thing
wasn't my touch
or your laugh
or silence
last thing
was skidding, swerving,
metal into plastic
plastic into metal,
snapping, bending, cracking
you
and
I
hitting
black ice
black ice
hitting back
our car
and theirs
and theirs
and theirs
slamming
the ice-coated guardrail
careening
me into you into us into them into them into them
the last chance
for the last of your name disappearing
into oncoming traffic
into winter
into the mountain
that we couldn't wait to
escape to
all I can think about is
finding my way into those vast arms
and speaking without words
one more frantic moment
being seen by your perfect eyes
answer me
echoing
as the helicopter finds
a safe place
to land
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Christy Munson
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Comments (1)
Brilliantly creative and fantastic entry! Enjoyed this a lot! 🤍