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ONE MORE TIME

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By Babs IversonPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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ONE MORE TIME
Photo by Mick Haupt on Unsplash

Minutes after the Super Bowl win,

Mahomes celebrated with a big grin.

Eavesdropping by hot-dropped microphones,

The MVP doesn't want trips or rhinestones.

Mahomes boldly states, that there is more to achieve.

Leaving unknown listeners to disbelieve.

On the field with his wife and teammates,

His voice, there weren't any mistakes.

Before they dispersed,

The quarterback announced that he wanted to be first.

Next year, wanting to win one more,

Mahomes would be the first to win three straight Super Bowl titles an amazing score.

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Author's notes: This is for sleepy drafts unofficial eavesdropping sleepy mission challenge. Inspiration came from the Super Bowl game. This is one of the many hot-dropped microphone incidents that were reported online. Without a doubt, frustrations and emotions were displayed. However, the MVP has an accomplishment plan for next year.

Here's sleepy drafts' challenge:

Thank you for reading, ONE MORE TIME!

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Jay Kantor11 days ago

    Hi-Bi ~ Go Dodger/Ranger Blue. Just posted a reach- back baseball story 'Hit me Again'...and thought of you! Jk.in.l.a.

  • Trishawn Blake2 months ago

    I absolutely love this! Kept me hooked from the beginning to the end... You're extremely gifted ❤️❤️❤️

  • Jay Kantor2 months ago

    Hi 'B' ~ Football-Frenzie...thought you were just a baseball groupie. Miss hearing from you; we have always related well. I wanted to introduce you to my Brother featured in my "Twins"...being from our generation you will git-it. j.in.l.a.

  • Excellent work, Babs 💜🩷💙

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Joe O’Connor2 months ago

    Very topical Babs, and I like how you have weaved what happened into a poetic framework 👏 Mahomes is something special for sure.

  • Call Me Les2 months ago

    What a cool example of eavesdropping! Way to go Babs!

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Wonderful one Babs. Congrats to you and Superbowl peeps. TS yeah.

  • Denise E Lindquist2 months ago

    Congratulations on the top story!!🎉🎉🎉

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Fun entry, Babs! Well done!

  • Caroline Jane2 months ago

    Nicely done Babs! 🥰

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    Your stat is challenging your story is so beautiful you write like this you will be a great writer I wish and yes one more thing please open my vocal id and a story come later

  • Nelson Nelson2 months ago

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  • SJ Covey2 months ago

    Wonderful piece of writing 👏👏👏

  • Test2 months ago

    Superior effort! Keep the outstanding work—congrats!

  • Great job capturing the post-Super Bowl moment and Mahomes' determination for next year's victory!

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh2 months ago

    YEAH!!! This Kansan gives your piece lots of love. If you had been around our family during the game you would have overheard plenty of yelling.

  • Julia Schulz2 months ago

    Congratulations!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    That was a great Superbowl!!! Best of luck to them winning the Superbowl trifecta. Loved your entry Babs, Congrats!!!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Really unique piece on eavesdropping! Great job and congratulations on top story

  • Test2 months ago

    Nice work. Congratulations on top story.

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Congrats on the TS

  • sleepy drafts2 months ago

    Back to say congratulations on Top Story, Babs!!! This was awesome! 👏🏻❤️💗

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