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A Promise Of

By Moe RadosevichPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - October 2023
Photo by Vino Li on Unsplash

and October came with,

a promise,

of changing leaves,

shorter days,

magical displays;

a promise,

of harvesting the reap,

summer’s labors,

bred deep;

a promise,

of cooler days,

rides in the hay!

spooky ways;

a promise,

of a chance for snow,

oh no!!

say it’s not so;

a promise,

of trick or treat,

money or eat,

costumes complete;

a promise,

of witches,

and goblins,

apple bobbin;

a promise,

of ghosts,

headless hosts,

marshmallows to toast;

a promise,

of mountains majestic,

with vibrant hue,

summer, where are you?,

a promise,

of spooky mansions,

haunted by spirits,

do we dare go near it?,

a promise,

of bats and vampires,

witches in flight,

oh, a frightening sight;

a promise,

of a month for treats,

so many sweet sweets,

October is especially neat!!!

thought I’d start the month with some fun hopefully lasting until the month is done, Trick or Treat, thanks for reading!!


About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

Reader insights


Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  3. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  1. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  2. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Felista Estep Sutherland2 months ago

    Fun and visual! 😍✨

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Well done, buddy! Congratulations!

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    I read this but I was not able to comment on and heart. Love this !

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Spectacular work! Congrats on your TOP Story Moe! :)

  • Mattie :)2 months ago

    Cool poem. Love this time of year. Congrats on TS :)

  • Naveed2 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story,

  • This is so sweet. Love it

  • Rachel Deeming2 months ago

    I never thought of October as a month with promise but you've proved me wrong. Upbeat! Loved it!

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    This is so perky, like the chill on the breeze!

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    Love this 🎃 🍁

  • Fantastic! You perfectly set the stage for October.

  • Carol Townend2 months ago

    I love October too, and I love the Halloween theme in your poem.

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    This is great! Congrats on the TS.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    "Headless hosts." Perfect line and visual for the season. Not looking forward to the cold though, lol. Great read and congrats, Moe!

  • Caroline Jane2 months ago

    Smiling big time after reading this! 😁

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Great work! Congrats on top story!

  • Great take on the season

  • An awesome poem for Spooktober! Brilliant work!

  • Grz Colm2 months ago

    Fun and pacey writing! 👏Terrific work! It’s getting hot here! 😅

  • Mackenzie Davis2 months ago

    Oh this is so fun, Moe, rich with October truth, but also a deep groundedness. Loved your rhymes. "goblins" and "bobbin'" was one of my favorites. :D

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Love the Autumn weather and loving your fantastic rhyming October poem!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Nice😉👍

  • Donna Renee2 months ago

    I love this! I giggled at "oh, no! say it's not so!"🤣 ... the rhythm of this was so cool!

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