sitting on the deck bird watching when a large fluffy cloud caught my eye and sent me to neverland. Please enjoy the ride along with me. Thanks for reading.
oh to be on a cloud,
shouting out loud,
“look at me,
I feel so free.”
to jump from one,
thru the sun,
and romp the sky,
so dangerously high!
to taste the dew,
riding along too,
watching droplets fall,
at nature’s call;
to touch a rainbow,
with colors aglow,
catching the breeze,
relaxing, “at ease,”
and seeing it’s mate,
to help saturate,
making some rain,
drenching the plain,
look at the jet,
getting wet,
passing thru,
this cumulus of dew!!
the sky to touch,
I’d like so much,
to sometime see,
the sky touch me:
as the clouds now break,
I must forsake,
this magical ride,
with nothing to hide.
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Moe Radosevich
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Comments (8)
this is such a fun one!!
That was some kind of flight in the sky 🙂
To take flight! Great job Moe! 😊👏
Thank you so much for bringing us on this wonderful and magical adventure! I enjoyed myself alot!
Fantastic cloud ride!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
sounds wonderful
I recently finished reading an incredible story that had me hooked from start to finish. The characters were so well-developed and the plot kept me on the edge of my seat with its surprising twists and turns. It was clear that the author put a lot of effort and skill into crafting this masterpiece of literature. Reading stories like this one always reminds me of why I am so passionate about the written word.you can also read mine.
What a great ride, buddy! Thanks for taking us along!