Nothingness of War
An abecedarian
An inverse abecedarian
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Animosity regarding a topic
barricades the openness of the mind.
controversy polluting our sight,
drowning the opinions of others because
earth hung on nothing, by nothing,
forsaking science; because it was always science vs
…God.
Hell raising on the earth
insulting each others intelligence, that’s the heart of man.
jealousy capacitating the exquisite design
killing off the inner sober mind
levitating adversity from the shrines of
men. The only thing evolving is the
never-ending cycle of various catastrophes of
outraged earth that creates war because of our flawed autonomy.
perhaps, this makes the most sense to me.
Quaking the souls between humanity, slandering;
race, politics and religion through bloodshed, and blood
stains on the bitter hearts of empty hollow-beings. As they worship their
talismans, passing on guns to the
upheaval of our children. Forfeit your pride and spot the
value in your veins. If you are science, you are a canvas of nothing to paint.
Wildebeests worship! Upon the dry
xeric pasture, needing nothing;
yearlong craters over the landscape drizzle a
zillion stars in a blank sky of nothingness; ironic, how war strikes out of everything, yet nothing.
About the Creator
Natasha Collazo
**Studying Modern Journalism @ NYU **
Project: The diary of an emo Latina
I get inspired at the mid of night
Stock market by day, howler by night
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Comments (7)
That was powerful, and very well done.
Well done! Keep up the good work!
At its best, science is an attempt to better understand the mind & will of God. At its worst, it becomes strategies to gain advantage & power over others. As for insulting my intelligence, I fear there is no need as most things I utter do a good enough job of it all on their own.
This was deeper than the deepest depths of the ocean! Every single line was so freaking powerful! You blew my mind with this! 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯
Profound writing!!!
Wow! This is very powerful and incredibly well done. 💗
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This is so beautifully evocative and well-written. What a heartbreaking poem.