Narc, Narc
New cell, who dis?
You made me fall into your pit
With your lies and your bait
The fall was far too easy
The tale you wove
To drag me down
Was too good to be true
You tore at me to pull me back
Then you'd tear me up once more
Rip my soul wide open for fun
Then grin at my true self
Make me beg you for more
Hate the time I talk with you
Hate you more than I can say
Hate my weak lust
Hate my weak want
Hate my weak soul
Hate you more than need you
Call me and I still ran back
With all my hate and then some
For more of what I still don't know
Does hate have this kind of hold
A hold I must duel with all my fire
All my zeal, all the love I will lose
If I fall into your pit one more time
Your mood drew me in
So sad, need me so much
A lone soul who begs for love
Begs for warm arms
But can't be kind
Can't get close
With a hard, evil ego
Keep your sick love
Away from my hurt soul
Away from my true love
You beg me to sin
I want no part of you
But, I cave and run back in
Then I find out too late
It's more of the same
You lure me into your bent game
Just one more time
The last time I fell into your trap
It was with my eyes wide open
But, when I walk, it's done, over
I beg God to be free of you
I know now what this was
It was a date with a sick mind
I was the star in your head trip
I was the best you'd ever met
Then I was the bad guy
Who gave you all the pain
Your goal was to ruin me
Ruin my life and all I had
To make up for what you don't
And won't ever have
Play me for the fool I am
Then, in an evil mood,
I drop you into thin air
With a grin
Am I free of your foul glue?
Or am I now you?
About the Creator
Tina D'Angelo
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Comments (19)
Tina, this has been on my reading list for a while and I am so excited to finally have gotten to read it! This was dark and twisted and relatable! Great work! Also congratulations on Top Story, the badge was so well earned! 😊
Wow, too incredibly relatable. thank you for sharing a bit of yourself. Congrats on the top story
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉😉❤️
I love the mutuality of this dance, it permeated the poem and then, right at the end, the acknowledgement, and now I wonder is this poem about two hurt souls, or just the one?
I feel Your pain thank you for sharing the truth not many can do You are a real human a gem to be find in here ! You will heal from him never give up the Love for Yourself !
Ok this was stunning, really glad it got the top story recognition!! Amazing how powerful this is whilst navigating the limitations of the challenge! Congratulations on the TS
Wonderful piece. Congrats on the TS
I love the way you turned this into a real truth at the end. Loved everything about this. Congrats on a well deserved Top Story.
Powerful! My favorite lines are your ending twist, "Am I free of your foul glue? Or am I now you?" Kudos!
This is so very well written and the question you raise at the end is a real wake up call. It flows so well that the constraints of the challenge go unnoticed. Well done!
Fantastically written!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!♥️♥️💕
The title is so great. The content of this poem is so relevant, real, and raw. Well done and congrats on your TS
Shaping your message to fit the short and sweet challenge parameters in what reads effortlessly by reveals masterful skills.
Congrats on Top Story, Tina! 🥂💕
Wow. I am amazed at how well you put this together.
I found this to be so relatable! I went through exactly this with a narcissist so about 2 years. I'm so glad I got away. Loved your poem!
Tina, I felt every word of this so deeply! I’m still in recovery from narcissistic abuse. It started with my mother, and I think you could say the same. A mother who competed with me for attention. Then it became a pattern of me attracting those type of men, who I would be financially dependent on, just like I was dependent on my single mother for all my needs. And even when I had the money to get away from them, in my mind I thought I didn’t. So I’d stay in abusive situations, trying to get the love from them my mother never gave me. But they would all be competitive with me like her, trying to tear me down. Dr Ramani’s channel is so good! I’m glad you shared the link for those who can relate to your poem. We all deserve to heal, and to receive love that is pure. You are a damn good writer, and I have all the respect in the world for you, because you use that to help others feel less alone. Thanks for going to the dark places sometimes.
First, you found a great picture to augment your story. This is truly dark and disturbing, showing that sometimes the only way to escape is to become what you hate. Very well written!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YBNNXk-2Trc If you think you've been duped by a narcissist, please watch this doctor's tutorials.