From the heart, feelings turn real
The simplicity of love greets
Time and space walk together
Disguising the hope that sounds
The sign of presence becomes meaning
Voice from within
Shout out the recesses of the heart
Together with dead hopes
Silent to contemplate
On uncertain love
Seeing it without belonging
The real distance is present
Looking without feeling
like feeling love without reciprocation
How can it go?
If it comes without a reason
How can it disappear?
If it comes back only to hide
Self consciousness antagonizes hope
Nailing in silence
Speaks in a fantasy
Breaking unreal dreams
Until the chance to go wandering
written by Emil Indarw
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Emil indw
I always use the people around me as inspiration in my writing. They will be special people if you know how to write about them.
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Symphony of Madness
Written for the Randy Barker, Unofficial, 'Prompted #4' Challenge. Details below. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Welcome to Vocal+!! I see you are a new member on this global platform for creatives. Firstly, thank you for reading my entry in the ‘Just one second’ Challenge. I very much enjoyed your poem and your words expressed a deep sense iof melancholy. I have Subscribed and added insights. If you’re looking for a small supportive Facebook group, to promote your writing with dedicated administrators - join Vocal +Assist. I wholeheartedly recommend it, Pauline 🌸
Loved your poem, so gorgeous!❤️