My favorite color is you
A poem based on Don’t Hug Me, I’m Scared the series. In “David’s” perspective. It’s about death and life. And comfort.
I get a feeling I’ve done this before
I’ve seen your scared face
I’ve tried to get through your red door
When all my life rhymes and doesn’t always
Fit
It forces all of us to feel like their rhythms and angry classifications of logic
Is really good, and so clever
Society reaches us to our fingertips, in a fuzzy draining space
It tells us exactly how to move
How to dream, how to make up funny sounds
Like achoo! is funny (don’t you hear all of us laughing, so fun)
And seeing you is really nice, even in the darkness, I can still make out your redness, so sweet
And though we learned about electricity
No one told me that being so close to
you feels like
A brand new type of current
Not defined and very important I think
Like your color
You’re my favorite one
You’re covered head to toe with
That color that sounds like home,
A comfort zone I intend to swim in, if your color could be in a pool
Red, I know it is
That’s you
Yes, but if your color comes alive
Does it want to
Create something new?
I get a very strange feeling I’ve done this before
I saw your sad face
I went through your red
Door
I had died, but in a sense, we all did, yeah
I had died,
I heard you say.
Maybe I’m crazy, you’re crazy
But when I came back up, unexpectedly from the salted earth,
And saw your red rosy smile
And our other friend’s yellow face, his eyes red from sobbing, dirt on his cheek
Your expression, too hard to read,
I knew I could dunk myself, immersed into your deep heart hue,
And live there, (oh how I longed to live here forever…)
My
Comfort in a sea of troubling words that rhymed when they shouldn’t have.
About the Creator
Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos,
I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels
The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella The Job and Atonement will be published this year by JMS Books
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