My Chocolate Romeo👑❤️
Handsome with the defense of my intelligence and also he held up an adequate swagger.
He warms my heart and steals my soul...
Like a thief in the night...
He dropped his emotions and carried his pride...
I feel that I love him, and he makes me whole.
Fairest if I wasn't misguided by the things I didn't know...
I would comprehend how to stay high when he goes low...
My Chocolate Romeo,
So Dark and Sweet...
He is my poetic muse and All that I need.
He inspired me to Love him and left me to wonder if he could Love me...
He leads with words 💬
Nonetheless and Guides me with his Curiosity...
I feel like a wallflower
Evolving but caught up in his intimacy...
His love is like a Rocket (Big, Fast, and kinda frightening)
He was the first one,
To take my Breathe away with a Kiss...
Truly I miss those chocolate lips!
Just like his pants hanging below his waist
I wondered if we would Fit...
Inside this imperfect reality,
And yet,
His spirit still runs after me...
✨✨❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
😊I hope you enjoyed reading this Bonus Piece From My Romeo Collection-
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Very nicely done.
Oh, please let things not go amiss & press their tender lips together in love & in life forevermore this time.
Just when I thought they would live happily ever after. Star crossed lovers. 💖 Beautiful work as always.
'His love is like a Rocket (Big, Fast, and kinda frightening)' What an absolutely fantastic line and just where it needs to be to make your landing stick! 👏🎈
Very good Lonzo
Such sweet and gentle words from you Lonzo. I love this. It’s so intimate. I want a chocolate Romeo too now ❤️❤️🤭
Lovely words and a wonderful image
So good! You paint a picture with emotion! I loved ‘I would comprehend how to stay high when he goes low...’ ❤️🌹
I’m waiting for my chocolate Romeo too lol
Oh wow, thank you so much Lonzo for giving as a bonus poem from the Romeo series! I loved it!
lovely
Another wonderful, beautiful, passionate, perfectly romantic poem, Lonzo! And WOW..one of those lines really had me 😅 Spicy, spicy! 🤩🤩🤩
I can feel your heart in your words! Once again very well done!
Great poem. Nice work!
You obviously put a good amount of thought into what you write. As always Lonzo you've donea great job here. I love the rhyme scheme. Masterfully done.
Fantastic buddy, nice writing 😊
Ooo, this was wonderful! Loved so many of your word choices. Bravo, great work!!
Whoo! S T R O N G . This piece has such STRENGTH in it, Lonzo! Amazing work. Thank you for sharing 💙
Amazing work Handsome Zo! love it!
Wow, seriously what a beautiful flow! You used such great verbiage in this one. Excellent stuff.
I feel like a wallflower Evolving but caught up in his intimacy... My favorite 🤩 part! So utterly intimate and intense! Romantic 🥰excellent work