Hot and sweaty
Primed and ready
Mind is lost
Lost in lust
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Lips are wet
Pursed and set
Mind is hazy
Hazy in lust
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (7)
Fabulous!!!
amazing!
Whoooooooo!
At the end I may have been feeling a little hazy, lol. You created quite an atmosphere, ahem, in just a few short lines. Great piece!!
Great piece. Sexy.
Oh, felt the fire in this one for sure!! ❤️🔥❤️🔥
Short, sweet and straight to the point! Loved it!