Intensive Care
D N R
after the pleasantries and subtleties
of chattering on about the weather,
needlework, craft shows, baby steps and diapers
after the small and idle
with such unremarkable enthusiasm for ourselves
and our excuses,
in the silence of fatigue and guilt
and mounting frustration,
we sink our teeth into buttered croissants, raspberry jam,
scrambled eggs, country ham,
and try to wash it all away
with Perrier
and several aspirin
*
inevitably
the waiter will remove the flatware and utensils
and so
soon
again
we stumble over words and phrases
and apologies
talking out of turn, talking over one another, talking about anything
except
death
the ugliness of its intrusion
*
during these lingering 72 hours
and for that matter
throughout the preceding decades
during which she smoked two packs a day
with indifference and enabled ignorance,
each of us has stood beside her,
counted on her,
and provided for her
during these trying end-stage years
*
now,
once again,
this morning,
without care for our own injustices
-our daily routines dismantled-
we assemble inside cold, sterile walls
and divest of jackets, cards and balloons, and swarm around her
to solemnly watch excruciation and desperation
slip
into ambivalence
*
we recognize our own shortcomings and reaffirm
the impotence of medical technology
and those countless missing chapters
*
she is fragile and tiny
trapped inside her suffocating body
and an eager generation’s choices --
she fills with fluids and fatigue
in exchange for vanity and vision
*
nothing except hospice care is new
not the discomfort,
nor the shortness of breath,
nor the fear coming to terms with her mortality,
which invariably reminds us of our own
*
her heart is weak and growing colder
she recognizes little, save agony,
an ageless companion she cares no longer to recount
*
her flecks of gold spin gray atop her bony head--
wintry white scalp, frosted by anxiety
her cracked skin, scaly checkerboard browns, yellows, and chalky grays
and so tiny is her dry mouth that
I love you
can no longer slip out
*
so failing is her testimony to life
that thoughts of her grand-babies can no longer
steer her
away
from thoughts of cessation
*
and so it is deliberated
and decided
and concluded
with few words--
just three unspeakable letters
*
as we adult-children
soothe ourselves with silence
and denial
and hope
for peaceful sleep
***
Copyright © 11/16/2004 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.
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Here again your writing invites the reader to sit in your feelings with you and walk with you through the complex emotions you're experiencing. You're such a gifted storyteller. Thank you for sharing your words.
There are so many lines that I love in this - but I think ‘daily routines dismantled’ really sums up how horrific it is to sit in a hospital/ hospice setting and watch (and wait) for a loved one to die. Wow this was so good Christy. I’m guessing you’re writing about someone close to you so sending you all the very best. Take care.