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may pain dissipate

By Christy MunsonPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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In silence may pain dissipate

Allow grief to invoke its plan

Life is not ours to understand

I’ll meet you, then, beside the gate

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Time is too cruel to ever wait

He plays his part, imperfect hand

In silence may pain dissipate

Allow grief to invoke its plan

.

A million times I’ll find a way

Bereft, I’ll still do all I can

What tests there are, I will withstand

I’ll keep you close, my dearest mate

In silence may pain dissipate

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Copyright © 04/23/2024 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.

Author's note: Unfortunately, I missed the window for Randy Baker's exciting Writer's Unofficial Challenge Prompted #3, Rondel. But I love a great challenge, unofficial or otherwise, so I choose to play knowing sometimes playing is everything!

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Comments (7)

  • Andrea Corwin 3 months ago

    Nice job!

  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    Not a fan of this form but you made this beautiful.

  • Shirley Belk3 months ago

    So many lessons to learn from this one! (about life, grief, and how to write a great poem!)

  • This was so poignantly beautiful! You executed the rondell so brilliantly!

  • Gloria Penelope3 months ago

    I loved it. Nice job!

  • Randy Baker3 months ago

    Well done!

  • Esala Gunathilake3 months ago

    Agreed!

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