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If Two

Inspired By Rudyard Kipling, David Gates and Writing For Vocal

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2022
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If?

This is a semi free form poem Inspired by Rudyard Kipling's “If”, David Gates’ “If” and just Writing For Vocal. You can listen to me reading it in the video if you would like.

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If You Can Always Keep Your Calm

After Your Third Rejection

Even Though They Never Say Why

Then You Are On The Right Track

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If You Can Always Keep Your Calm

After Waiting For A Week

For Your Story’s Publication

You Are On The Right Road

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If You Can Always Keep Your Calm

When Your Reads Are At Zero

Though You Know You Are Being Read

You Are Taking The Right Way

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If You Can Always Keep Your Calm

When You Know Your Work Is Wonderful

But Not Deemed A Top Story

You Are Nearing Perfection

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If You Can Always Keep Your Calm

When You Write For A Challenge

You Know You Cannot Win

You Will Be Seen As A Star

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Always Keep Calm

Always Be Positive

And One Day

What If Might Happen

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

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  • Jonathan Townendabout a year ago

    Great truthful piece of poetry. An inspiring read😊!

  • LilyRose2 years ago

    Reading this made me smile - very apt poem for most of the readers here! Looking forward to reading your other works!

  • Great poem Mike

  • Graham Cooke2 years ago

    Nice one Mike.

  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story, Mike! Great work!

  • Clever thoughts... Simply stated... Good job!!!

  • This is wonderful! And such a good reminder - in today's age of instant feedback and to some, instant gratification, staying calm often feels out of reach. This is truly beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

  • Linda Rivenbark2 years ago

    A very good take on "If" for Vocal creators! I discovered Kipling's poem (If) in high school and read it until I could repeat it from memory. It contains so much truth, as does your "If Two". Hearted it.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Inspirational and motivational. Kipling's poem, "IF" is one of my all time favorites. Loving this!💖💕

  • Very beautiful and inspirational!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is great Mike. Love it.

  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    That is precious, Mike!

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