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If I had

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By Paul StewartPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
If I had
Photo by Pawel Czerwinski on Unsplash

If I had enough blood to spare,

I'd let it flow without a care

Stab my veins and let it run

From midnight to the morning sun

Instead I think it might be best

To bleed from the pen not my chest

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Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

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Comments (8)

  • Karissa E.L. Cuff8 months ago

    great poem and brilliant ending

  • Kristen Balyeat8 months ago

    I was going to say how bloody brilliant this is, but looks like Dana already jumped on that bad joke, so... I loved it and loved the message behind it!

  • Zara Blume8 months ago

    Wow. So much conveyed in so few words, and something I’ve been thinking about a lot lately. Or at least my own interpretation of this resonates with me, LOL! I’ve been thinking about the human desire to give. To contribute. And for some, that does become a toxic martyrdom that helps absolutely no one as they bleed themselves dry. But for those who tap into their gifts, like you with your penmanship, they’re able to give of themselves without sacrificing their wellbeing. Maybe I’ve missed the mark, but then again true art is open to interpretation. I loved the rhyme scheme and succinctness too.

  • Dana Crandell8 months ago

    Bloody good poetry! (Sorry; it was there and I had to jump on it.)

  • Oh very wellllll. Keep all your blood to yourself then 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved your poem! 🍩🥐

  • I often think when I'm donating blood, "Just take it all. Give it to someone who will make good use of it." But from you, I prefer your bleeding be done from the pen.

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    Made me smile

  • Test8 months ago

    Good point! This made me smile. Healing in words Lovely sentiment despite the violence of the initial magery x Brilliantly done 🤍

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