If I Give a Space Glob a Crayon
Will it be for food, art, or war?
When my toddler's chubby hands
Began to hit and hurl,
I gave her colored magic wands
That opened up her world.
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These crayons helped her make her mark
On paper, books, and walls,
On cups and plates and arms and legs
Of all her baby dolls.
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Since then, she's learned to draw and write
And color inside the lines.
She can make the shapes and alphabet
(The print and cursive kind).
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I still have crayons in my purse
In case my child gets bored,
But she doesn't need them much these days.
She's almost twenty-four.
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Then, last week, I was happy
That I had crayons nearby.
As I sat on a park bench one morning,
An avocado-sized glob fell from the sky!
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It had two eyes on its slimy green front
And a hole below them for a mouth.
It skittered toward me, growling.
I felt things were going south!
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As it hopped up on my bench, I opened my purse
And pulled out my Ziploc crayon bag.
I held out a yellow-green crayon,
Which it took with its mouth, starting to gag.
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As I riffled through my purse for paper,
The glob started batting my arm
With the yellow-green crayon like a baby,
Not doing me any harm.
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I put a tiny notebook page
In front of the glob next to me.
I drew a heart on it with a red crayon,
Which the glob leaned over to see.
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Then, after watching me draw more hearts,
The glob drew lots of yellow-green
Squiggles with dots all around,
Just like toddler scribbles I'd seen.
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Soon, Globby and I were drawing together!
I showed how to make circles and lines,
Until I saw a ten foot high purple glob,
Skittering toward us through the pines.
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If anyone finds this paper,
I wrote this poem in red
As the purple glob carried me and Globby
To a large egg-shaped metal shed.
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It's silver, gold, and periwinkle,
Like the best crayons in the box.
I'll throw this paper out on the grass now
Before the shed door locks...
About the Creator
Rebecca Morton
An older Gen X-er, my childhood was surrounded by theatre people. My adulthood has been surrounded by children, first my students, then my own, and now more students! You can also find me on Medium here: https://medium.com/@becklesjm
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Comments (17)
Congratulations π₯³ top story
Congrats on your second place! ππ―ππ This was creative and fun to read.
Congratulations on your placing in the challenge, can totally see why this was picked. Loved the innocence of it all and the wonder. The rhymes were delightful and I loved the fact that the MC is whisked off on some adventures, hopefully! Well done!
Oh so wonderfully creative Rebecca. Truly alien and earthling joint venture. I hope you make it out alive, one mother should understand another. Kudos on you win. Nicely done.
Love it! Congratulations on your very creative story ππππ.
Haha π This is Awesome πβ¨ and Deserves a Win π ππCongratulationsββββ
Congratulations on your win! Great story!
Sweet poem Rebecca! Hearty congratulations on your win! I hope this gave you plenty to smile about. Great job!
Congratulations! Cute and vivid :)
Congratulations!!!
A wonderful tale! Congratulations on the win!
Brilliant! Fantastic choice of object to demonstrate humanity's propensity to speak with lines and color. Congratulations on your win
Delightful and positive. Excellent work. Congrats on the win.
Love how you tell a whole story in your poem. Congrats on the win!
Congrats!!! I loved your poem!
Nicely done. Congrats
Lol, this was so funny! Brilliant work!