I Want to Be Your Home
I Love You
I want to be that hand you hold when you need a hand to hold
I want to be the kiss you get when you need a kiss
I want to be the one you cry to when you need to cry
I want to be the one who eases your pain when you are in pain
I want to be your feeling of safety when you are scared
I want to bring you a drink of water when you are thirsty
I want to feed you your food when you are hungry
I want to be the one that rubs your feet when your feet are sore
I want to be the one that fans your body when you feel overheated
I want to be the one that brings you love when you feel all alone
I want to be your home when you need that feeling of home
About the Creator
Rick Henry Christopher
Writing fulfills my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.
The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.
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Comments (13)
Wonderful! Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing
Two people at home in each other... This is amazingly beautiful. 👏
A very sweet poem, Rick!
Such a sweet and wonderful poem! To love and be loved like this is a gift! Beautiful piece, Rick! 💫
Well done!
That someone is a lucky person :)
To be like this for someone in your life is even better than to have someone like this in your life. (Though both are good.)
Awww, this was just so sweet and absolutely wonderful! I loved it so much!
-Written With Lots of Love ❤️ 📝😊
Very moving
Love & commitment expressed to the highest degree!!! Lovely & loved it❤️❤️💕
So sweet and earnest
I would suggest these as wedding vows (I am, among other things, a wedding officiant). Lovely.