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I Am A Banana

by Rick Henry about a month ago in performance poetry / surreal poetry
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Going bananas for bananas!!!

This poem is a Vocal + Assist Facebook community challenge…

I am a banana

And I'm wearing plaid pajamas

Coasting through Havana

Rockin' the cabana

Got my green bandana

Waiting for Diana

Leaving Louisiana

On our way to Indiana

It's just Americana

Remember what I say I am a banana

Slippers and pajamas

Dancing in Havana

Dress in the cabana

Wear the snazziest bandana

Listen to Diana

Singin' in Louisiana

Pitstop Indiana

Celebrate Americana

But remember one more time… that I am a banana that is wearing plaid pajamas

performance poetrysurreal poetry

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Rick Henry

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.

https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist

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  • Blake O'Connor27 days ago

    This is hilarious!! 😂😂😂

  • Awesome rhymes all the way through

  • Babs Iverson28 days ago

    Superb!!! Loved it!!!

  • Carol Townend29 days ago

    Brilliant! Loved it.

  • C. H. Richard30 days ago

    Has a great ring to it! Thanks for this fun little challenge!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is great. It's got a musical flow. Love it.

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    That was a blast!! I was like humming along to it by the end. Great work, my friend :)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was a fun poem! And now I'm singing the Bananas in Pyjamas theme song, lol!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    Omgsh. Too fun

  • Dawn Saloisabout a month ago

    Great job finding so many words that rhyme with banana! The poem could be a nursery rhyme or a song.

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a month ago

    This sounds like one of those crazy bedtime rhymes within a children's poetry book. That being written, I'm exhausted. Time to crash.

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