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To the Stars

new beginnings; old starts

By Andrei Z.Published about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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To the Stars
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Evanescence has two faces—but none can be seen.

Cast your spells. Do. I won't intervene.

Loosen your grip. Lose your head. Let it go.

I succumb. I suppose I am lost. I'm your

Prey. Every day. Down below. From above, our

Senescence predetermined, from the start.

Escalating, elevating to the stars.

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About the Creator

Andrei Z.

Overthinker.

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  • Anna 23 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!

  • Gloria Penelope24 days ago

    Congrats on TS!

  • Manisha Dhalani26 days ago

    Congrats on Top story!

  • Cathy holmes26 days ago

    This is a beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.

  • angela hepworth26 days ago

    Congrats on top story!!

  • I just love this <3 Happily subscribed, can't wait to read more

  • Rachel Deeming27 days ago

    So, this has a lot in it. I feel like it's about marriage because of the rings andthe idea of senescence - a wish for it to last. But there also seems to be some discord there, some uncertainty. So, I'm not sure. It speaks of relationships and their progression anyway to me. Either way, right or wrong, it made me think and that is no bad thing.

  • Congratulations on your top story

  • Arhealthi27 days ago

    Top story

  • Donna Fox (HKB)27 days ago

    Yay!!! Congrats on Top Story!!

  • D. D. Lee27 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story

  • Paul Stewart27 days ago

    Oh, this is stupendous, Andrei! Just...yeah...clever and flows so beautifully! Well done! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Andrea Corwin 27 days ago

    I love the alliteration; this poem is lyrical and beautiful.

  • Grz Colmabout a month ago

    ☺️👏Where you been hiding Andrei? Missed reading your pieces on here. Are you good? How’s the study?

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a month ago

    Andrei this was a great piece!! I love how thought provoking this is and the whimsy of your language!!

  • Suze Kayabout a month ago

    I think I’ve reread this like five times trying to pin down the meaning. I think I could read it fifteen more and not get closer. But I’m still getting immense meaning from it. Beautiful and flickering.

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