i reach a place that’s deep inside
a place masked by skin and clothing
a very dark and foreboding space
where i cling to my hate fear and loathing
a rancid turgid maleficent pond
of hurts, both fictitious and real
a cesspool of tried lied and denied
a place for wounds i won’t let heal
i document the wrongs and rights
indeed they are inversely skewed
of course i meant to be offensive
and yes i was being rude
you fucking people shit me to tears
you’re all so fucking dumb
willing victims of a factory stupidity
to which most of you succumb
submissively prostrate you present yourselves
there’s no way that i can miss
but bring it to your goldfish attention
you moan you shriek you hiss!
my pen is both arrow and sword
and are always ready sharp and drawn
with no shortage ever of targets
to be summarily executed at dawn
a crushing crescendo of scathing cheek
insanity charged with profanity
stand well clear of my scathing wit
as i remove the veneer of your vanity
sardonic toilet humour filled acumen
the whole process a cathartic relief
it gives me an out so don’t fuck me about
it has nothing to do with belief
you know quite soon i’ll touch a nerve
with all my literal literary poking
while i have no care for you or your feelings
how do you know i wasn’t just joking?
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Comments (7)
Raw, powerful emotion. Excellent piece.
😳 that ending. Every line was powerful and purposeful, yet the last line was quite impactful. It felt like rather than the words written with ink, they were written in blood.
This is very in your face. I truly like it. Especially, willing victims of a factory stupidity to which most of you succumb. I nominated this for Poppy’s graveyard challenge.
Sick piece!!😁
so passionate and a very therapeutic read 'a cesspool of tried lied and denied' was my favourite line
Brenton, this is raw and yet so relatable with that "I have no fucks to give" kind of attitude! It drips confidence and oozes authenticity! Great work!
Just brilliant! I also have some angry poems on my profile, if you want to check it out. I’m not sure if they are as good as yours though :)