Hey Dad, I was Wondering
An Answer I Will Never Know
Hey Dad
I was wondering…
When was the first time you realized
I wasn’t the son you wanted?
Was it when I was born,
While you were a child still yourself?
Did you resent having a child so young?
Maybe it was when I was little,
And closer to mom than you.
Her life was us kids.
Was it because Mom didn’t have enough time in the day
To tend to your every rule and want?
Was it because you wanted freedom?
From responsibility.
From providing for our needs.
From being bogged down with a family
That you created.
Maybe it was because of the time
My nine year old self was mad after a beating
And wrote “I hate dad” on a paper bag
And left it on top of the trash so you’d see it.
Could it have been that time you took me to work with you
And I needed to hold your hand
In the big city with so many people
Walking by. You swatted my hand away
And your hand was all I needed
To feel safe.
Maybe it was when you realized
I wasn’t naturally athletic.
I tried soccer one year, to make you happy
And you embarrassed me at the games
Yelling from the sidelines
Then reminding me on the way home how much I sucked at sports.
It could have been that my grades weren’t perfect.
Or maybe because I was so sick when I was a kid.
Maybe it was because I wasn’t as drawn to fishing and hunting
Like you were
Like my younger brother was.
I enjoyed those things.
You ruined those times for me
With your criticism because
I wasn’t as good as you were
Or I didn’t do it your way.
We weren’t close when I was a teen,
When I needed a father most.
I know you were disappointed
And didn’t approve of me marrying
And having a child
When I was still a child myself,
Just like you did.
Was it because my jobs
Always involved working with people
And not working with my hands like you?
The truth is you criticized
You berated.
You stopped talking to me,
When I did or said something you didn’t approve of.
I learned to live
Without your approval
Without your advice and guidance.
Sometimes without you.
And then you died
And I would never know
When was the first time
You realized
I wasn’t the son you wanted.
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J. Delaney-Howe
Bipolar poet. Father. Grandfather. Husband. Gay man. I write poetry, prose, some fiction and a good bit about family. Thank you for stopping by.
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Comments (9)
This is heartbreaking, the angst of living in the shadow of a parent's disapproval tends to haunt us for the rest of our lives. For me it was mother, always trying to live up to her expectations or simply avoid her critical glare.
Heartfelt. I kind of understand this feeling. I'm sorry for your loss and I hope you have healed from this sadness.
Oh my. That is heartwrenching. I'm sorry.
A father is a very powerful thing to be. I am very sorry that you were treated like that. He never found the power within himself. It wasn't you! From what I've read, I think you strive to be the best dad anyone could have, though. That makes you a powerful man than outshines the DNA that brought you forth. You have broken the generational curse. Be proud of that! Hugs
I felt every bit of this. I'm glad you decided to share. Some fathers just don't know the negative impact they have on their kids. I know this too well. Thank you for sharing.
OMG, this is so sad. I'm glad you wrote it; it must have been cathartic for you. Mental abuse and berating is very hard to grow up with. You are better than he acted, because you recognize the wrong, and are able to express it so perfectly here, congrats.
This is hard to read, I hope it wasn’t too hard to write. 💕
Sending ❤️❤️ I’m sorry… you didn’t deserve any of that!
🖤🖤