Silence
A Tautogram
Silence
Solicits sadness
Silence
Spreads sorrow
Say something
Stop silently sitting
Scream something
Send sadness scattering
Seeking solace
Say sweet sentences
Stillness, subdued, surrendering sepulchral somberness
Stranded spirit, surrendering soul
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J. Delaney-Howe
Bipolar poet. Father. Grandfather. Husband. Gay man. I write poetry, prose, some fiction and a good bit about family. Thank you for stopping by.
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Read before, but excellent tautogram! “Screaming something” sometimes helps! 😄
missed this the first time around. I appreciate you resharing!
Loved this, Jim. "Stranded spirit" sums up loneliness in someone desperate so well.
This is very cleverly done and I love it J.
Love this. Powerful tauntogram that says so much in few words ❤️
Love it!
Profound and creatively written 📝 ❤️🔥❗well done,J😉
Fabulous!!!!
Lovely
Most excellent Tautogram
This is a powerful and evocative poem that explores the many emotions that can be elicited by the absence of sound. The repetition of the tautogram "Silence" throughout the poem creates a sense of continuity and consistency that is both soothing and unsettling. The poem's central message is that silence can be a source of sadness and sorrow, and that we should not simply sit silently in the face of this emotion. The lines "Say something / Stop silently sitting / Scream something / Send sadness scattering" serve as a call to action, urging readers to find their voice and speak out against the silence that surrounds them. The final lines of the poem are particularly powerful, as they evoke a sense of surrender and resignation in the face of the overwhelming emotions that silence can bring. The use of alliteration in "Stillness, subdued, surrendering sepulchral somberness / Stranded spirit, surrendering soul" creates a sense of finality and closure that is both poignant and heartbreaking. Overall, this is a well-crafted and deeply moving poem that showcases the author's skill in using language to capture complex emotions and ideas. It serves as a reminder that silence can be a powerful force, and that we should not underestimate its ability to shape our thoughts and emotions.
Congrats on the top story. This was beautiful
Ther is a writer/seeker in all of us. Some bring stronger vibes of it. Heart felt words.
Very nice! Congratulations on Top Story!
The sparse words in this piece serves to magnify the silence. Well done and congratulations on your Top Story!
Very nice J.
Well done!
Beautiful!
Well deserved top story.
Congratulations on your Top Story
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Absolutely brilliant!!! Amazing job. Congratulations on your top story
Outstanding! 👏🏻
Silence seem selfish sometimes... 👍🏽
Yay! So glad this got Top Story! Well done!