Heaven In A Coffee Cup
A Sedoka For Coffee Lovers
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Many of my friends love their coffee, in particular my friend Cherri who whenever we text tells me that the has got her coffee. She is not the only one, but this is inspired by her but is for all my coffee-loving friends.
I like some coffee but usually go with instant in the morning for my caffeine hit.
I feel a little lazy as I am going to share this as a sedoka which you can read about here, but I do actually have to write this, and it has been spinning around in my head all day.
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Oh My Woken Soul
Cafetiere Is Full
Pours Into My Coffee Cup
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Oh My Caffeine Hit
I Love Coffee In My Cup
Love The Taste And Drink It Up
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Comments (18)
Awesome! Also left a heart β€
Nicely done! Coffee rocks!
Coffee is life!
I love coffee drinks, like lattes and tonics, so I enjoyed this. I also appreciate the link explaining what a sedoka is. Cheers. βοΈ
I never learned to like coffee (except in cake & ice cream). But I do resonate with the idea of needing something to help me wake up, though I usually don't get it.
I feel the same way about hot chocolate! Lovely poem!
Well, you snagged me from the title!! This was wonderful :) Loved the form. Now I'm off to have my 'hit'!!
Nicely done. Now, where's my coffee?
Oooo, I do love my caffeine hit! I loved your Sedoka!
Splendid!!! Left a heart β₯
No idea what a Sedoka is until today. My iPadβs autocorrect keeps trying to change it to senna. Iβm drinking coffee as I drink this.
Thank you every one for your lovely comments, really appreciated
Haha nice one! βοΈβοΈ caffeine cheers!
Awesome, Mike β¨πβ
Yes! I speak coffee-ese, and this little poem awakens the senses. Great job!
Nice, coffee is a great subject for poetry. I like to have them both together!
Yup! That's me in a nutshell... or a coffee cup. LOL! Love it!
Aw, this is sweet! I don't drink coffee myself but I adore the smell!