Heads It Is, Tails It's Not
Free meltdowns and hissy-fits in between
i hope this is love
if not—it’s too late
cuz this done slid
all down my neck
‘bout to seep thru skin and bone
soon urge that can’t stop
warm mass on the move
mind a mask—a mess
my only plan
a HAIL MARY of a poem
back up on the wall
with drip now lake
bite now blue (ouch, but ooh yum)
give now take
our time not new
i sure hope to god this is love
if not—i’m past care
my soul took hits and hurt
did not cope well
from hymn to low hum
a huge pain push
that did not fail
to grab what felt good
tore each cell and scar
in an area i held fast
fear of joy too high huge
for tiny me
who will i be if i let go
who will i see if i don’t show
here we move here we meet
here i stay here i beat
the tune of a song long past want
that figs will turn ripe
not from time but due to type
well
with lips on lock
feet off edge
in at the deep end
and body wide open
I just
hope wish plea ache pray
that this
is love
Thank you for reading my poem for the Vocal Media Short and Sweet Challenge. It really was a challenge, and even after edits, some five-letter words snuck in there.
If you want to read another love poem not restricted to four letters or less, I recommend these:-
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Comments (6)
I loved this line, "from hymn to low hum". Masterful wordplay as always!
Beautiful piece.
I just hope wish plea ache pray that this is love This part hit me really hard. Your poem was so deep and I loved it!
Dear Di-Di ~ Thanks for Tossing us your usually delightful Hail-Mary's ~ So glad that you could relate to 'Cultural Exchange' - Same "Vegetarian" Lasagna - Just a little different recipes. Jay
Love, love love it! I sure hope this one places 😊
Great work here. You really named the emotions and got the feelings out in your work!