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Heads It Is, Tails It's Not

Free meltdowns and hissy-fits in between

By The Dani WriterPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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i hope this is love

if not—it’s too late

cuz this done slid

all down my neck

‘bout to seep thru skin and bone

soon urge that can’t stop

warm mass on the move

mind a mask—a mess

my only plan

a HAIL MARY of a poem

back up on the wall

with drip now lake

bite now blue (ouch, but ooh yum)

give now take

our time not new

i sure hope to god this is love

if not—i’m past care

my soul took hits and hurt

did not cope well

from hymn to low hum

a huge pain push

that did not fail

to grab what felt good

tore each cell and scar

in an area i held fast

fear of joy too high huge

for tiny me

who will i be if i let go

who will i see if i don’t show

here we move here we meet

here i stay here i beat

the tune of a song long past want

that figs will turn ripe

not from time but due to type

well

with lips on lock

feet off edge

in at the deep end

and body wide open

I just

hope wish plea ache pray

that this

is love

By Obi - @pixel7propix on Unsplash

Thank you for reading my poem for the Vocal Media Short and Sweet Challenge. It really was a challenge, and even after edits, some five-letter words snuck in there.

If you want to read another love poem not restricted to four letters or less, I recommend these:-

Feel free to get in touch @thedaniwriter on Twitter and Instagram. I truly appreciate your support!

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The Dani Writer

Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • L.C. Schäfer9 months ago

    I loved this line, "from hymn to low hum". Masterful wordplay as always!

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Beautiful piece.

  • I just hope wish plea ache pray that this is love This part hit me really hard. Your poem was so deep and I loved it!

  • Jay Kantor10 months ago

    Dear Di-Di ~ Thanks for Tossing us your usually delightful Hail-Mary's ~ So glad that you could relate to 'Cultural Exchange' - Same "Vegetarian" Lasagna - Just a little different recipes. Jay

  • C. H. Richard10 months ago

    Love, love love it! I sure hope this one places 😊

  • Kendall Defoe 10 months ago

    Great work here. You really named the emotions and got the feelings out in your work!

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