He Thought He Was Alone But...
An Abecedarian Poem
Albert was all alone in his office feeling
Bitter. He was working late. Suddenly, he heard a
Creepy voice call out his name. It scared the
Daylights out of him so he ran towards the
Elevator only to realise it was out of order.
"Fudge!", he swore as he walked back to his office and
Gulped some water when a menacing laugh made the
Hair on the back of his neck stand up. He
Immediately ran out of his office and saw
Jack staring at him. That was impossible because
Knew he was all alone but there was Jack
Looking as pale as a ghost. "Jack?" he called. Jack
Mumbled something and approached him slowly.
"No, you're not Jack! Stay away from me!" and
Off he ran towards the emergency stairs. Although he
Prayed to escape this nightmare, that didn't
Quite happen. Jack managed to catch him
Right before he reached the
Stairs. Jack inserted his fangs into his neck where it left
Two punctures after Jack drank his blood. Now he
Understood that Jack is actually a
Vampire. He was even more horrified
When Jack cracked his skull which seemed glued together by
Xanthan gum. Jack has been
Yearning for brains. Jack is a hybrid of a vampire and a
An Abecedarian poem, also known as an abecedarius, abecedary, or abecedarian, is a kind of acrostic poem in which the first letter of each line or verse begins with successive letters of the alphabet.
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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran
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Very cool- I had not heard of this type of poem before- thank you for sharing!
haha. this is great. Well done.
Well done! That was very suspenseful.
How suspenseful and creative!
Thank you for the chuckles! It was a nice poem!
I loved this and the suspense was great!
At the end of the line starting Jack, should there be a 'he' at the end?
An interesting poem, if a little ghoulish.
THIS IS TOO DANG GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I ACTUALLY LAUGHED! Excellent! I don't think I could have done that, but now I'm honestly interested in trying! Would you proofread it if I did???
Very clever my friend.
It was interesting. Liked it.
This is fabulous i I’ve it
The Abecedarian Poem is always a great fun challenge. Well done
Xanthan gum, huh? Clever! Lol Fun read!
I like vampire 🧛🏿♀️ stories so this was really cool. It was cute and funny and creative. I love most how you made a story from the poem.
Great use of the alphabet here. Ingeniously written. Brilliant.
Poor Albert. That's why you should never stay late at work.
How clever. It’s amazing all the different kinds of poems there are
Very nice, I've never heard of this kind of poem before today, but I like it
Nice! I've never seen a poem done like this. It cool. And a hybrid zom-pire is unique